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DetachedDreamer

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Floating in fantasy

2019-03-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer14h
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    I like the author and his past stories. this one is too early to tell but it has a lot of potential. only problem I have is the MC. Characters who have Gojo or Sukuna's powers usually are boring, lack human emotions, and lack any future character growth. The MC, doesn't like anything. cept food. hates people, talking, wasting time (everything's a waste of time to him). He's morally neutral, no loyalties, no faction, no compass to keep him attached to reality. He doesn't have a defined personality so you never know what he's going to do. which is a cheap writing trick, whether its to keep the audience guessing or just to cover up plotholes. Hes one of those types who would take the long way around an ambush instead of quickly resolving the situation and getting to the destination quickly, just to spite weaker folk even if he wastes more time not trying to help. Just so no one gets the idea that he's a hero or will help anyone, even indirectly. A boring MC won't be able to carry a story with out a few shocking deaths so I wonder who it'll be? Maybe im wrong and we will see something more from this MC that I've not seen in the last 50 MCs, who so far seem identical. Still early so I may revise my review.

    Is It Wrong to Cook in a Dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer1d
    Commented

    lol sounds terrible

    Ch 1 The Start: Nine tails attack
    Evil: Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Aurelius_Imperator
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer2d
    Commented

    author is a maniac if he likes korra more. run!

    Ch 1 No Game
    I am reborn in Akame ga KILL
    Anime & Comics · FanFictionForge
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer2d
    Replied to Sir_Squirrel

    so true

    I am reborn in Akame ga KILL
    Anime & Comics · FanFictionForge
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer2d
    Replied to Ikkarus
    Exploring the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Ikkarus
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer2d
    Replied to GodOfLight

    1 star ratings are usually from sad folk who dont have friends. family probably just puts up with him, hoping he'll go away eventually. whatever it is that gots you so hateful. it gets better buddy!

    The Apex (A Marvel Fan-Fic)
    Book&Literature · Baph0met
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer2d
    Commented

    lol wolverine, not enraged, is one of the most learned martial artists in the "universe." Even his instincts still carry that knowledge. unless he's gotten the metal ripped out of him and he's in a feral state then this is just bull. stop throwing dirt on great characters.

    Honestly, his style reminded me of how I used to fight all the way back when I had first arrived in Kamar Taj, a wild and instinctive one.
    Not a Spider, But a Dragon
    Anime & Comics · DRAGONS_EYE
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Commented

    ya looks like he'll be boring forever. smh

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: The Sisters of Fate? The Last Resort
    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Posted

    Hands down one of the worst MCs you can read about. hes boring, impatient, emotionless, he gives dead stares, and thats really it. he does love his parents I guess thats something. I mean there's trash then there's this MC. hes worries about batman. trashes on him. he wants to be low key. he gets annoyed when folk ask him questions. I could go on on how bad of an MC this author created but I only read a few chapters. im scared to read more. the story itself would of been awesome if you had a completely different MC. but here we are. this author has been totally corrupted by the fanfic ideology on this app. so sad. because he seems to have talent but with MCs like this its doomed to fail.

    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Commented

    so sad he's being low key and he thinks batman is a psycho? the MC's pathetic for that

    'I really don't want anyone else knowing even a bit about my powers, especially not a paranoid psycho like Batman, but if I don't give this a shot, i'll have to use my last resort, Sigh!,' Ray thought as he contemplated his next move.
    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Commented
    Ch 24 update
    Reborn as klaus Mikaelson at the beginning of Originals
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Commented

    garbage

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    Harry Potter: Please Graduate From Hogwarts Soon and Go Away!
    Book&Literature · FFAddict
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Replied to InternetSaint

    lol anyone who sees politics in the stuff they don't like are sad, angry, and pathetic. Politics suck. liberals are trash and so are conservatives. this story might suck but we all know you do too. you don't use Google and the multitude of verified articles to research? wait youre not one those anti vaxxers who thinks everything is a conspiracy? ignorant folk question everything yet seek no answers. lol Jesus christ. American Media is trash but you sound very much like a fox News guys. which is no worse than an NBC or CNN guy. stop b*tching about liberals. I bet you use the word beta and simp every day too. Zero friend having *ss. you're on Instagram every day screaming "F*cking Liberals" on random cooking videos because they added to much spice. lolololol

    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer11d
    Replied to OddOne99

    a walking dead story without any of the cast is just another zombie story. Might as well make an original story instead. The villians of the story can only carry this story so far without the drama that put them in conflict in the first place.

    Ch 10 Consequences
    My New Life in The Walking Dead
    TV · SocioPhobia
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer12d
    Posted

    Great story all around. im a big fan of the internet/multiversal Cafe genre and this definitely helps satisfy my fix. I like the changes made so far to the story and how its proceeded so far. I wish it updated more often but we cant have everything. Keep up the good work.

    Mustafu Hyper Tech Internet Cafe
    Anime & Comics · FrozenCog
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer12d
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    the story says he won't be by fairy tail or its members? does that change and he gets involved with the plot or is this just about another side quester?

    Fairy Tail: Wandering Beast
    Anime & Comics · Indra_effect7020
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer12d
    Commented

    wow this author is still updating this trash can of a story

    Ch 196 Ch-196 War nears.
    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer12d
    Commented

    what a stupid story lol Jesus people will try anything nowadays

    Ch 46 What a strange spiritual world
    Homelander is in DC
    Anime & Comics · OasisTL
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer13d
    Commented

    so we need to pay more to include more stories in your pat reon? it's not an all inclusive thing but rather separate purchases?

    Ch 46 Chapter 46: Ino
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer13d
    Replied to ERFAN

    I can't disagree but anyone who uses the word beta or alpha are closet gays.

    Red Nara
    Anime & Comics · l_legolas
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