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Review Detail of MZAF in Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

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MZAF
MZAFAuthor1yrMZAF

Shameless Author here. I hope you check out my book. You will miss a masterpiece if you don't add it to your collection šŸ«¢

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Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord

MZAF

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Jack_4352
Jack_4352Lv15Jack_4352

Yuri?

Polygamy
PolygamyLv4Polygamy

polygamy ?

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13FallenAngeI

That's the thing, a lot of readers won't read until they know. So you're losing readers this way.

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MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

Yes , it has polygamy

Polygamy:polygamy ?
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

yes

Polygamy:polygamy ?
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

Vampires exist in my novel so I think it would suit the overall theme. If you have watched series such as "The Vampire Diaries," "Teen Wolf," and other supernatural shows, you may have seen this type of relationship depicted frequently. I will also ensure that this type relationship is smoothly integrated into the story and doesn't feel forced by making interesting characters that readers would relate to. šŸ˜‡

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MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

This novel has harem/smut/R18/ content.

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13FallenAngeI

Is it between har*m members?

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Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4Shadow_Gamer1

you know it's a bad book when the auther has to compliment his own book

MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

Shadow_Gamer1:you know it's a bad book when the auther has to compliment his own book
John_Cross_8810
John_Cross_8810Lv3John_Cross_8810

Do you have a discord server for it, I can't find the link?

Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13Jheydi327

Same... Yuri between his harem members considered NTR for me... Disgusted me sometimes

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MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

wait Yuri means partner sharing ? I didn't know that. There's no such thing in my book. lol

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MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

I misunderstood the question. Nope there's no such thing in my novel .

Jheydi327:Same... Yuri between his harem members considered NTR for me... Disgusted me sometimes
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Yuri by definition is girls "fun" - if your mc is a girl, and pick up other girls for her harem. Thats yuri. Alone its not partner sharing, thats a normal harem book with same s..x lemons. The problem is when you have a male mc that has all female harem, and his girls have feelings, desi res not only for mc but for other harem members. If you read a novel, when you self insert yourelf as an mc (I read like that) and cultivates feeling with your harem, only for them to start kissing and pleasu ring other girls in the group cos mc is busy with 2 other partners and they cant wait for 15min. Some people dont mind it, since they are a "big family" for most(and me) thats kinda disgusting and feels like partner sharing, thats why I called it that. I like harem books where mcs girls have sister-like relationship and dont do s..x related stuff to each other. 3som, 4som all is fine but mc as the focus.

MZAF:wait Yuri means partner sharing ? I didn't know that. There's no such thing in my book. lol
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Harem readers mostly like lemons of mc and his girls. Some dont mind yuri in harem, but you lose lots of people that consider it ntr. While those who dont mind it will read anyway cos its not something they care that much, they are here for the story.

MZAF:wait Yuri means partner sharing ? I didn't know that. There's no such thing in my book. lol
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

I'm new to the term so I misunderstood. My MC harem doesn't have that kind of relationship. It has some of that type of content but it's not directly related to MC, just some fillers from side characters/villain/extras šŸ˜…

Daoist_Culture:Yuri by definition is girls "fun" - if your mc is a girl, and pick up other girls for her harem. Thats yuri. Alone its not partner sharing, thats a normal harem book with same s..x lemons. The problem is when you have a male mc that has all female harem, and his girls have feelings, desi res not only for mc but for other harem members. If you read a novel, when you self insert yourelf as an mc (I read like that) and cultivates feeling with your harem, only for them to start kissing and pleasu ring other girls in the group cos mc is busy with 2 other partners and they cant wait for 15min. Some people dont mind it, since they are a "big family" for most(and me) thats kinda disgusting and feels like partner sharing, thats why I called it that. I like harem books where mcs girls have sister-like relationship and dont do s..x related stuff to each other. 3som, 4som all is fine but mc as the focus.
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

Good to know, I ll read it for sure! I dont want to be in a situation where I spend coins on a book and than author adds those stuff into harem, so I usualy ask before readingšŸ˜…

MZAF:I'm new to the term so I misunderstood. My MC harem doesn't have that kind of relationship. It has some of that type of content but it's not directly related to MC, just some fillers from side characters/villain/extras šŸ˜…
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

It's my fault for not making it clear.

Daoist_Culture:Good to know, I ll read it for sure! I dont want to be in a situation where I spend coins on a book and than author adds those stuff into harem, so I usualy ask before readingšŸ˜…
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

Nope. It's more like background info that it exist in that world. It's not an important part of the story.

FallenAngeI:Is it between har*m members?
MZAF
MZAFAuthorMZAF

I just want to clarify because I misunderstood your question before. It has such content but it's not directly related to the MC or important to the plot . It's more like fillers to show that it does exist in the world .

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