Interesting start, and really good so far, it’s well written so keep up the good work, however, what I noticed first was : 1st, the title isn't appealing. 2nd, the cover isn't eye-catching. 3rd, the synopsis isn't inviting. And it would have been even better if you didn't start the first chapter with world-building.
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LIKEThanks though, ill see about the cover but I don't know if ill change the synopsis or the first chap
Amera_Mee:It's really good, so keep up.image