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bitterrain1mthCommentedDon't try gaslighting author-san
'If dragons crave riches, why flaunt them?' Rey mused silently.- bitterrain3mthReplied to ShuviLily
Ohhh, somehow like twitch streamer organizations right?? That's cool man, kudos
<Greatest Streamer System has been installed.> - bitterrain3mthCommented
A bloody Commy🔫🔫
'I am essentially taking money from someone without doing anything. Isn't that like stealing? I mean, I didn't do anything.' - bitterrain3mthCommented
Honestly, I'm not criticizing the novel here. But I've always wanted the read a book where the transmigrated Mc doesn't get a cheat but reaches the greatness he wants through effort. Even if it's just a Mundane level of greatness, it would still be something.No hate to the author though, loving this book.
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Not too much to say currently.It has very high potential.Firstly, the main character is very unique. It's been long since I've seen such a type of person being the MC of a novel. He is certainly a highlight of the novel.For other characters. The novel is still young, so we haven't really seen others much. But I like where it's going.The writing is nearly perfect, barely seen any mistakes.The world is looking pretty interesting too, but we haven't really seen much of it too. After all the novel is still young. But I like the premise of the world.So, simply put. Just read the novel.
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Nah, Alex is definitely at fault
That was over three years ago, Alex had just arrived in this city to attend university. One day, he was drinking with three friends in a bar. One of them accidentally burned the sofa while smoking, and it happened that Thomas, the owner of the bar, saw him. As a result, he was scolded by Thomas. - bitterrain10mthCommented
This would be extremely stupid if the last unknown she sent there became the demon king
"You are nothing but useless trash in my eyes; I was thinking about giving you a peaceful death, but now I have changed my mind; you don't want to go to Pandora." "Then that's what I am going to do to you." Ending her cold words with that she increased the pressure surrounding Karna. - bitterrain10mthCommented
😂😂😂, u can tell the author is a fan
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Now this, I definitely dig
Once they had unloaded the goods in the village, the guards accompanied Light, showing him the way to the lairs, their hearts pounding with a mixture of fear and anticipation. - bitterrain10mthCommented
Even the conversation isn't forced, again I can feel this happening in a real world senario
Revenna: Light, even before you became this... person, I already told you we are a family. Nothing will ever change that. - bitterrain10mthCommented
Now, your definitely getting better
Revenna gazed upon the village, once a dull and impoverished place, now gradually transforming into a bustling community. The sounds of hammers striking nails and villagers chattering filled the air as people worked together to rebuild homes and businesses. Farmers shared their agricultural knowledge with eager learners. - bitterrain10mthCommented
The conversation feels a bit forced, but hey they were experiments. What am I supposed to expect. Still feels forced though
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Ngl, feels a bit out if place
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It really has potential, just take time to describe the environment and let the characters tell the story
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Sharp scream, I don't know if she can let out pain
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