Review Detail of ewrtwe_wewe in I Farm Demons : Unholy Necromancer In the Apocalypse

Disapointing, love necromancer stories, but this is just frustraring to read, I have to force myself to keep going.A lot of the text in the first chapters needs to be editet since their format is wrong, either by mistake or lack of attention.Grammar and tenses are off, quite a few times, fix it.If all of that gets fixed I'd give this a 3, the story is very annoying to read, MC should be a wise 500 yr old demon, feels like a complaining child, clearly Author wants sister to be in Harem, which feels forced, whole things should be re-written