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ewrtwe_wewe1mthReplied to Jackson_frostdoes that happen in the novel "dual cultivation"? or any novel you know that seems fun
They all look prim and properly feminine but according to his memories, the female students have another uniform. That particular one looks more comfortable since that dress uniform is sleeveless and low cut bodices… If he wasn't mistaken, it can be worn on specific days.- ewrtwe_wewe1mthCommented
not* knowing
Sophie remained speechless, now knowing what to say. She was stuck with forging and caring for Aurelia and didn't know when she would see Davis again as she felt like it might be years before she could take his time due to the responsibilities they both had, but these sisters of hers… were having, fun and complaining about it…? - ewrtwe_wewe6mthReplied to Genaromsp
Greyrat why do I know that name? I forgot help plz
After a while, Elysia's small brain would get tired from trying to understand all those big words and she would fall asleep. Only after putting her to sleep in the safety of Bytra's Doomslayer crib did they put their theories into practice. - ewrtwe_wewe6mthPosted
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Disapointing, love necromancer stories, but this is just frustraring to read, I have to force myself to keep going.A lot of the text in the first chapters needs to be editet since their format is wrong, either by mistake or lack of attention.Grammar and tenses are off, quite a few times, fix it.If all of that gets fixed I'd give this a 3, the story is very annoying to read, MC should be a wise 500 yr old demon, feels like a complaining child, clearly Author wants sister to be in Harem, which feels forced, whole things should be re-written
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ok, now there is a problem he has millions why would hundreds of thousands be a problem?
However, after a quick glance, he set it aside for now, as it cost a staggering amount for a tier 3 array, requiring hundreds of thousands. - ewrtwe_wewe7mthCommented
with time to meet? or with rare free time to meet?
Maximus, having cleared his schedule for the day, found himself with a rare to meet the Emberwood family. - ewrtwe_wewe7mthCommented
are these system prices or the prices for sale, it's a bit hard to recognise
[Enchanted Weaver's Loom -A loom that can weave clothes rapidly, with the quality of the resulting product up to one grade. Price 5] - ewrtwe_wewe7mthCommented
gateway logistic?
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although he is rich, he and his family... you need the comma there
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pcs? Pieces? I'm confused
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you shouldn't use "always", because it's been what 2 years since he came here, say " Since his reincarnation and system, he had decided he wasnted to establish his own kingdom" makes more sense
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Although there are some problems with the statement the territory isn't his, it's next to his territory, and I'm sorry but desert kingdoms did something similar, because it really is just sand, in this case, that is the best comparison harsh land that gives nothing but death
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Empire of Kingdom pick one pls
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Robert then began the tale of the wine that is not afraid of deep alleys.