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shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv41yrshirou_sureiya

can you make it a small harem like 4 to 5

Extra's Magic

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ahmed_tanim
ahmed_tanimLv2ahmed_tanim

and sucker your girl has her own harem. looser

shirou_sureiya:shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity
DaoisthLoifE
DaoisthLoifELv3DaoisthLoifE

don't you fking dare do it author

shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4shirou_sureiya

shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity

DaoisthLoifE:don't you fking dare do it author
Quasar_light
Quasar_lightLv3Quasar_light

no

md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4md_rizvi

Hahaha~ Stop bro stop! he is already dead!!

shirou_sureiya:shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity
Yatagarasuu
YatagarasuuLv15Yatagarasuu

ironic bc harem haters are more likely to get a gf than u incels LOL

shirou_sureiya:shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity
Radpiplup
RadpiplupLv12Radpiplup

ironic

shirou_sureiya:shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity
Flowwer_
Flowwer_Lv13Flowwer_

bro what, that was a large harem in my opinion 💀

Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

lol virgin

ZoraFN
ZoraFNLv13ZoraFN

Ratio22:4

shirou_sureiya:shut it harem hater i hope you become single in all of your life for and the girls will hate you and look you with disgust that the trash is worth something than you for eternity
Denis_Nayram
Denis_NayramLv3Denis_Nayram

no dude

Daoist3t5Vkj
Daoist3t5VkjLv14Daoist3t5Vkj

please no

Yatagarasuu
YatagarasuuLv15Yatagarasuu

This has literally nothing to do with anyone being gay??? As a woman myself, I think any girl with self respect finds any guy that likes harems gross and a walking red flag. Men collecting women like trophies in general is just super objectifying. I don’t mind if MC has female companions if they aren’t there just for the sake of making MC look better and are actually well written characters that are important to the plot. Also, lots of straight guys don’t like harems. Some prefer no romance or just one girl or occasional romance subplots here and there etc. You can have great and beautiful female characters in a story without degrading/sexualizing them and turning it into a harem. If anything, things like that just ruin the plot for a lot of people. If you think only gay people don’t like something as morally ambiguous and story killing as harems then idk what to tell you at this point. Everyone has a different taste in genres in the first place so it’s silly to assume something like that.

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IHECHI_NDUKA
IHECHI_NDUKALv13IHECHI_NDUKA

Preach on

Yatagarasuu:This has literally nothing to do with anyone being gay??? As a woman myself, I think any girl with self respect finds any guy that likes harems gross and a walking red flag. Men collecting women like trophies in general is just super objectifying. I don’t mind if MC has female companions if they aren’t there just for the sake of making MC look better and are actually well written characters that are important to the plot. Also, lots of straight guys don’t like harems. Some prefer no romance or just one girl or occasional romance subplots here and there etc. You can have great and beautiful female characters in a story without degrading/sexualizing them and turning it into a harem. If anything, things like that just ruin the plot for a lot of people. If you think only gay people don’t like something as morally ambiguous and story killing as harems then idk what to tell you at this point. Everyone has a different taste in genres in the first place so it’s silly to assume something like that.
Tims232
Tims232Lv15Tims232

Don't ruin the story by giving bad suggestions.

Tims232
Tims232Lv15Tims232

I mean some harem stories are good, but that's because it was planned out really well from the beginning instead of being a spur of the moment decision to please a weird audience member that's hoping to live vicariously through some sort of flimsy perv fantasy.

Tims232:Don't ruin the story by giving bad suggestions.
Sympath4u
Sympath4uLv3Sympath4u

Noooo

afjanafnsfnaf
afjanafnsfnafLv3afjanafnsfnaf

don't bring your pervert fantasy on a already good story

shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4shirou_sureiya

just because i said harem doesn't mean its perverted you stupid get your mind out of the gutter you moron and why think this called a story in a story everthing you think is possible dont bring your beliefs and rules in here

afjanafnsfnaf:don't bring your pervert fantasy on a already good story
afjanafnsfnaf
afjanafnsfnafLv3afjanafnsfnaf

talk about belief for someone whobrings his harem as his desireand yeah it's perverted, distorted for someone wishing to be surrounded by girls, like you fella so don't bring your perverted, distorted, warp, imagination on an already good story

shirou_sureiya:just because i said harem doesn't mean its perverted you stupid get your mind out of the gutter you moron and why think this called a story in a story everthing you think is possible dont bring your beliefs and rules in here