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afjanafnsfnaf

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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf8mth
    Replied to Ink_Weaver122

    thx ,ok

    Ch 5 Forest Hunting:- Hunter's Haven
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    Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Ink_Weaver122
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf8mth
    Commented

    not a fan of Ivelia becoming the female lead

    Ivelia's cheeks turned a rosy shade of red and her ears also tinged with red due to this small gesture from him as she thought to herself while averting her gaze.
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    Extra And MC
    Fantasy · Caeruleum_
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    remind me of a phrase "eyes as blue as the azure sky"

    Turning my head, I saw a young woman with azure hair and eyes that were cold as ice.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    sometimes it kinda makes me cringebecause of the excessive flowery words

    Ch 173 Combat Exam (14)
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    Wondering why your flowery words are excessive

    The forest was shrouded in the hushed whispers of falling snowflakes, creating a serene blanket of white that concealed the secrets of the world beneath. Among the trees, a figure emerged, a girl with hair as brilliant as the clearest sky, a vivid azure that seemed to capture the essence of winter itself.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    this still got me laughing or confused why is it golden

    Golden particles began to gather in my right hand as I channeled Mana into the skill.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    "burned"

    I could see my flesh being licked by the intense flames, but the pain was quickly replaced by a surge of adrenaline.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    should use resounded

    I slammed into the beast's side with a force that jolted through my body. My sword met its target, sinking into the Frostfire Tiger's fur with a satisfying impact. The clash of steel against fur reverberated in the air, the sound merging with the echoes of the explosions.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    Author why does your writing style have too many metaphor and flowery words

    Ch 169 Combat Exam (10)
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    I feel like the "veil" is overused

    Suddenly, the blizzard around us seemed to disappear, as if we stepped through the veil of the storm into the Frostfire Tiger's lair.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Replied to shirou_sureiya

    talk about belief for someone whobrings his harem as his desireand yeah it's perverted, distorted for someone wishing to be surrounded by girls, like you fella so don't bring your perverted, distorted, warp, imagination on an already good story

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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Replied to shirou_sureiya

    don't bring your pervert fantasy on a already good story

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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    still wondering why it's color gold when his affinity is shadow

    Golden particles began to swirl within my hand and manifested into a translucent, ethereal blade.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    the last sentence here has too much flowery words

    Channeling Mana into my legs, I kicked up a cloud of snow underneath me, lunging forward like a comet streaking through the night sky.
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    Extra's Magic
    Fantasy · Gurdon
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    a Chinese manhua mc , where they will always kill those who offend them for little reason

    The Hero wasn't known as a viciously merciless antihero for nothing. He was the type to kill anyone who had shown him hostility. Ackster, who had said he would kill The Hero by voluntarily challenging him to a death battle, had already signed his death sentence. Even if Ackster realized his mistake and forfeited, The Hero wouldn't let it go. It might take a while, a couple of days, weeks, or months, even. But Ackster would disappear one day.
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    Rogue Villain
    Fantasy · armordillo
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf9mth
    Commented

    a Chinese manhua mc

    The Hero wasn't known as a viciously merciless antihero for nothing. He was the type to kill anyone who had shown him hostility. Ackster, who had said he would kill The Hero by voluntarily challenging him to a death battle, had already signed his death sentence. Even if Ackster realized his mistake and forfeited, The Hero wouldn't let it go. It might take a while, a couple of days, weeks, or months, even. But Ackster would disappear one day.
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    Rogue Villain
    Fantasy · armordillo
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf10mth
    Commented

    half elf so is he a half elf

    Nevertheless, the most distinctive feature of her was her slightly long ears, revealing her identity as a half-elf. 
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    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf10mth
    Commented

    robocop

    I placed my hand on my chest over my clothes and felt the hard surface of the red ruby that was now fused with me too.
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    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf10mth
    Commented

    curuious why didn't use "D,C,B,A,S,SS"

    Ch -1 Rankings
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    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • afjanafnsfnaf
    afjanafnsfnaf10mth
    Commented

    the bath with the SISTER Jess sends me shivers, still disgusting

    Ch 103 An Issue
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    My Friend and I Reincarnated Into a Tragedy Dating Game
    Fantasy · Disgrace
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