Review Detail of Aurora_Ryan in Xianxia: Tortoise Longevity Art
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In my new work on the pursuit of immortality by the main character, to the extent of venturing and investing in space exploration, when compared to other humans, what he lacks the most is not time. Please readers bear with any issues that might be related to word quality. Try my best, and please support this novel!
Xianxia: Tortoise Longevity Art
Aurora_Ryan
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I haven't read it yet, but the synopsis looks good. Also, it'd be best if you make it a Evil MC, more like a Neutral Evil MC. Because let's be honest, a human being with that age should only care about himself or at least have a monk-like mindset, only worrying about "breakthrough" or advancement in his technique. Romance should not be a thing too, as every human being or similar would fear such an Old Monster. Make it reasonable, a old man with 12,000 among humans with a few decades. You can already see that this old monster won't care of useless feelings / emotions such as love or hate, only in benefits. And he would do anything by any means to achieve immortality. Just saying, hope you do things good enough and don't make him lovers (read: glorified slaves)
Scottg:I haven't read it yet, but the synopsis looks good. Also, it'd be best if you make it a Evil MC, more like a Neutral Evil MC. Because let's be honest, a human being with that age should only care about himself or at least have a monk-like mindset, only worrying about "breakthrough" or advancement in his technique. Romance should not be a thing too, as every human being or similar would fear such an Old Monster. Make it reasonable, a old man with 12,000 among humans with a few decades. You can already see that this old monster won't care of useless feelings / emotions such as love or hate, only in benefits. And he would do anything by any means to achieve immortality. Just saying, hope you do things good enough and don't make him lovers (read: glorified slaves)
Indeed , have been seeing a lot lately , believe it would be good to see a MC that is neither good nor evil , just an MC that has millions of years to live and trying his best to become stronger
GifflarGod:too many evil mc novels coming up past couple months
I feel like it would be good to have some with more chill mc.. it's always from one fight to another.. i don't mean we need slice of life mc but just mc that does not go seek fights all the time.. also too many novels where it's about novel author going to his own novel..
SovereignOfDarc:Indeed , have been seeing a lot lately , believe it would be good to see a MC that is neither good nor evil , just an MC that has millions of years to live and trying his best to become stronger
i agree , im also tired of constant fights , some if not most novels have fights almost every 3rd chapter , never just chill adventure story novels
GifflarGod:I feel like it would be good to have some with more chill mc.. it's always from one fight to another.. i don't mean we need slice of life mc but just mc that does not go seek fights all the time.. also too many novels where it's about novel author going to his own novel..
Rahab_Kingosi:keep original intention in mind writing the story. Hope for stable updates
