webnovel
0
RainbowBeheader

RainbowBeheader

Lv13

WAT

2018-12-07 JoinedCzechia
460.1h

of reading

1267

Read books

Badges

10

Moments

3555
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    so what is the need for that overpowered garbage? you have perfectly working novel, why bring something that can just break any rules you have in your world

    Bringing an owl back from the dead was already stunning.
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    yo what, did he cut his chest open or?

    His chest was open as he sat in a lotus position atop his bed.
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    so these reality chapters are going to be a thing? it makes his novel world more like a whim, than second reality

    Ch 32 Comic Li Chen has a beautiful fan girl
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    practically the same. The one with higher realm/strenght/will will win

    [Old Li chose piercing the heavens; some might choose rending the earth asunder or a peerless speed but I chose to be the sword. My will is to cut.] 
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    he gets easy path to strength, but needs to be reminded. How?

    "I've been talking about will. It's not your conviction but a shapeless force that separates a swordsman from other cultivators. In our era where fire cultivators, earth cultivators, and others of varying elements have taken the mantle of power, the remaining swordsmen must share their legacy to avoid going extinct." 
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    just this is so cheating

    Old Li's tone made Li Chen feel embarrassed. As the author, he knew many techniques but hadn't selected which one would suit his path and this made him akin to a bumpkin. 
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    how many cheats from the start? i know that xianxia novels are trash genre, but still. There should be some point where it stops

    Ch 13 Diamond Body Technique
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Commented

    ok, author was for sure like that from the start, just denying it in his mind...

    It was meant to be for the protagonist and it was a manual that needed a partner of the opposite element to reach the peak. 
    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader17d
    Replied to DD_TheDreamer

    nice

    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader19d
    Replied to DD_TheDreamer

    hi. that no harem means 1 female lead? i have had people telling me that 4 arent harem yet, so waiting for your reply. thanks

    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Eastern · DD_TheDreamer
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader27d
    Replied to Dakshay

    always write what you want, if you like what you do and it has some class, you will get readers. So this is singlefemalelead or 2+?

    Conquering The Game's World
    Fantasy · Dakshay
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader30d
    Replied to gosha

    that happens in a pro football too... i would complain, but that doesnt make it good reading complaints several times

    He wasn't anyone's babysitter and was already hard-carrying this team enough as it was so he didn't feel the need to over-stress himself any further to motivate the team especially when he had warned them before coming into the second half to focus more on defense, but they had ignored him.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to XenoCantSee

    mc complains even more lol

    He wasn't anyone's babysitter and was already hard-carrying this team enough as it was so he didn't feel the need to over-stress himself any further to motivate the team especially when he had warned them before coming into the second half to focus more on defense, but they had ignored him.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to Sphire1707

    idk if they are used later, but i have read some novels that were good and 1 that was amazing, except all of them used anime/films/books references in them, when they could have done the same without mentioning it, and it distracted from reading their original at first, later it was annoying and most of them were dropped

    "... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to GifflarGod

    paranoia?

    He was merely being polite by smiling and responding as if he was surprised and enlightened, while in reality, he couldn't give a flying fuck about anybody's suspicions.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to BrucePickEmUp
    "Soccer boots, check,"
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to Sphire1707

    gj with this. Writing webnovels is difficult and you need to hook readers, slow start when reborn mc is better than kids is done in sports novels, fantasy, scifi and even female novels. If you look around there is pretty good chance that there are tens of football novels that went on hiatus with still kid mc....

    Since then, it had been eleven years and finally, he couldn't hold in the urge to not play on a big field with a crowd.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to rathan

    yo what, just this?

    I ran and ran, making my way towards the coach in a bid to borrow his phone and tell them not to come, but immediately I saw the coach on the phone with someone and looking at me with a pitiful look on his face, I knew I had failed.
    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader1mth
    Replied to Sphire1707

    that no harm means 1 girl?

    Greatest Of All Legends
    Sports · Sphire1707
    detail
  • RainbowBeheader
    RainbowBeheader3mth
    Replied to LLagier

    and what you wrote continued

    Lu Yan stopped her gesture for a short moment to consider the credibility of the dying young woman's words. But she dismissed her uncertainties without hesitation. Whether Miya was telling the truth or not was of no importance. Whoever tried to kill her deserved to die.
    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
    detail