Review Detail of Brezer in No More Pain For This Villain.
Review detail
wow just 14 chapters in and the pay wall hits. just wow. so anyway, the story isn't that great. the mc mainly just monologs the whole time. might be interesting later but I doubt the monologs will stop... show the story don't tell it and the scenes with the boss was just way too much, one paragraph his head it beat bald with iron pipes and disfigured but the next round he talks and if he was beat bald with iron pipes he would be dead with that much blunt force trauma. so short of the fake account post with 5 stars I woukd stay away and anyone charging before readers get a chance to even get into the story isn't worth reading, might as well put a pay wall one chapter 1.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Satan03
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....okay and only thing I'd like you to know is that.... Not a single one of these reviews are fake brother/sister so don't worry - it's just that they reviewed after atleast reading a bit ahead and not just at 14 where the paywall was put *BY MISTAKE* as even I would not to charge anyone at this early in the story. Only reason the novel is still in rankings and demand is because people like it.....and yeah I am still improving Hope one day you'd give it a shot.....till then have a good day.
