For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism. The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality. The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?
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LIKEBasically the protagonist transmigrated as a villain into a harem and is 100 chapters trying to make the false protagonist stay with all of the harem... A nanny of the false protagonist.
Ayce_o_Spade:Whatdo you mean he is building harem for the protagonist? Theres no way right? Why would the author write the novel like that?
More details if you dont mind. Does edward have a harem too? Or is he just hooking up the MC with all the heroines? Whats his reasoning for doing so? Im just super confused and wondering if I should even read this. I just got to vol 2.
DaoistUjfbBE:Basically the protagonist transmigrated as a villain into a harem and is 100 chapters trying to make the false protagonist stay with all of the harem... A nanny of the false protagonist.
Well... there are some girls interested in him, but those girls were also part of the fake protagonist's harem, so edward keeps pushing them towards the fake pragonist. Well, his motivation is because he's like those protagonists who are obsessed with the original story and do their best not to change it.
Ayce_o_Spade:More details if you dont mind. Does edward have a harem too? Or is he just hooking up the MC with all the heroines? Whats his reasoning for doing so? Im just super confused and wondering if I should even read this. I just got to vol 2.
Wait the girls like him but hes attempting to push them on someone else? Is he a cuck? What kind of drugs was the author smoking when he thought that was a good idea.
DaoistUjfbBE:Well... there are some girls interested in him, but those girls were also part of the fake protagonist's harem, so edward keeps pushing them towards the fake pragonist. Well, his motivation is because he's like those protagonists who are obsessed with the original story and do their best not to change it.
Yes, depending on the point of view this story can be considered an NTR... The author did it with a promise that the protagonist would change, but honestly after 100 chapters watching the protagonist create a harem for another I am totally discouraged from reading the history.
Ayce_o_Spade:Wait the girls like him but hes attempting to push them on someone else? Is he a cuck? What kind of drugs was the author smoking when he thought that was a good idea.
DaoistUjfbBE:Yes, depending on the point of view this story can be considered an NTR... The author did it with a promise that the protagonist would change, but honestly after 100 chapters watching the protagonist create a harem for another I am totally discouraged from reading the history.
DaoistUjfbBE:Yes, depending on the point of view this story can be considered an NTR... The author did it with a promise that the protagonist would change, but honestly after 100 chapters watching the protagonist create a harem for another I am totally discouraged from reading the history.
DaoistUjfbBE:Well... there are some girls interested in him, but those girls were also part of the fake protagonist's harem, so edward keeps pushing them towards the fake pragonist. Well, his motivation is because he's like those protagonists who are obsessed with the original story and do their best not to change it.
Right it's annoying honestly it was good until the mc became obsessed with making a harem for that J guy or something
Ayce_o_Spade:Whatdo you mean he is building harem for the protagonist? Theres no way right? Why would the author write the novel like that?
Believe me I wish I had read the reviews earlier I wouldn't have wasted my time reading it haaa what a waste
warriorofnorth:i was going to read this novel but after i read your review i changed my mind, what kind of mc build harem for other people? is this an evolved sheep or something?
Ayce_o_Spade:Wait the girls like him but hes attempting to push them on someone else? Is he a cuck? What kind of drugs was the author smoking when he thought that was a good idea.
Triple_6115:Right it's annoying honestly it was good until the mc became obsessed with making a harem for that J guy or something
Triple_6115:Believe me I wish I had read the reviews earlier I wouldn't have wasted my time reading it haaa what a waste