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DaoistUjfbBE5dCommentedI can't even imagine, but she must be a very attractive prostitute.
P.S: Can you guess who the whore Oliver was talking about with Robert is?- DaoistUjfbBE5dCommented
He's crazy lol
"Well, I remember that she had blonde hair and beautiful green eyes. She was a great sucker too. She seemed to be in her 20s… I think." I had a thoughtful expression on my face. - DaoistUjfbBE14dCommentedCh -1 Character Info
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Overall, it's a decent read, but there are a few problems. The protagonist is a bit boring and it's tedious as everyone around him tries to sell a manipulative image of him "He's using me", and most of the time the protagonist doesn't do anything special, he's just a normal smart guy. But the most serious problem in history would be its development. For example, there was a chapter where half of it was just the protagonist's friend saying "We are friends" and the protagonist responding "We are not friends", and this goes on for a good part of the chapter, and so on. This same scene happens more frequently to the point of being irritating, in other examples. The pacing isn't exactly perfect either, despite having chapters every day, many of them are just fillers and take place in one place with a single subject. But these problems that I detected do not destroy the story, in my opinion. There is still a lot of potential, and all these problems will be resolved as the author gains experience, something similar happened with Tapov and I will kill the author.
Ch 70 READ THIS - DaoistUjfbBE20dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Uglyism
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Finally a fanfic about a Daniel who isn't a sissy, it took a while for one to appear hahaha I'm going to love reading every moment
"The most profound journeys often begin with a single step, but it's the courage to continue that truly defines the depth of one's character." - DaoistUjfbBE1mthCommentedCh 82 Chapter 77: The End Of A Relationship!
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Finally an SI with good decisions, varys, cersei and joffrey need to die as quickly as possible.
Three king and queen were found dead in their own chambers. At a council meeting, he accused Lord Varys of conspiring with the Targaryens. The eunuch himself tried to say something but was executed. Pycelle was gloomy, probably afraid that someone would find out about the missing poison. Whether he guessed or not, it didn't matter. Bells began ringing throughout the capital, announcing the death of the young king and queen mother. The bodies of the Silent Sisters were sent to be buried in the Great Sept of Baelor. Afterwards he ordered the council to prepare for the coronation. - DaoistUjfbBE1mthCommentedBut still, going from F to A- in two months is simply impossible, unless I use 'that' method. I'm sure I'll be able to reach A- a lot faster if I use it, but if I get caught it will cause me a lot of problems.
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Finally a protagonist who recognizes that he cannot be the false protagonist's helper and is going after power!!
My goals are, kill Agares, then save the world, try to save Vincent in the process, kill the demon king, the most powerful being in the story, save countless people destined to die. And guess what I have to achieve my goals, a really cool magic to switch places, a bit of mana, information about the future, and a dream. - DaoistUjfbBE1mthReplied to Daoist452371
- DaoistUjfbBE2mthCommentedCh 5 A Little Wrestling
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13 years old is still a loli friend LOL
Since unlike the nobles of the Asura Kingdom, and even Rudeus, I have no desire for any pedo antics. - DaoistUjfbBE2mthCommented
Was it just losing your bond with your brother who is already thinking about becoming a prostitute? that's suzune LOL
Could she use it for the class' benefit? - DaoistUjfbBE2mthCommented
He meant you're next hihihi.
"Your words last night... What did you mean by that?"