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Review Detail of Krutch13 in In the movie worlds with my system

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Krutch13
Krutch13Lv141yrKrutch13

I couldn't make it past the first chapter. Grammar and punctuation are atrocious.

altalt

In the movie worlds with my system

lucifer_112

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Silva2B
Silva2BLv4Silva2B

For anyone wondering if this review is a legit one or falsely negative. It is indeed true, there’s a big lack of capitalization and simple punctuation like periods to end sentences. So if you get past that than good luck to you.

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

It's MTL, eventually you get used to ignoring errors and reading only what is necessary, don't worry, one day you will be a privileged person like MTL readers. Obviously if the story is trash don't read it xD

ShelMan
ShelManLv13ShelMan

I feel like my English has gotten worse from reading all these fanfics.

Bumin_the_wise
Bumin_the_wiseLv13Bumin_the_wise

ShelMan:I feel like my English has gotten worse from reading all these fanfics.
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1Thehighesthol1

This is a translation from China

Lord_of_cringe9000
Lord_of_cringe9000Lv3Lord_of_cringe9000

While the grammar is bad the story is worse, MC acts like an embarassment to men everywhere and is completely stupid

Spike009
Spike009Lv4Spike009

For everyone reading. The story is good. English I would say it feels like a kid is writing it to be honest. But if you can get past that. The story is good not the best. But there are not many novels that do a great job with Mc travelling different worlds.

Lord_of_cringe9000
Lord_of_cringe9000Lv3Lord_of_cringe9000

Even for a MTL it is bad

Gabichu_Yeah:It's MTL, eventually you get used to ignoring errors and reading only what is necessary, don't worry, one day you will be a privileged person like MTL readers. Obviously if the story is trash don't read it xD
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

it's possible, some MTL is just trash hahaha

Lord_of_cringe9000:Even for a MTL it is bad
Lord_of_cringe9000
Lord_of_cringe9000Lv3Lord_of_cringe9000

But even MTL are not this bad because well they do not make their heroes like that

Gabichu_Yeah:it's possible, some MTL is just trash hahaha
southgamez
southgamezLv15southgamez

I couldn't make it past the first 3 paragraphs with how monotonous it all sounded. My monkey brain has evolved since I began reading proper novels with proper grammar and spelling, so it's hard to find good fan fictions that won't make me immediately want to drop