A filler is not just that. A filler is also putting things that are irrelevant or just dragging things that really don’t contribute to the main story. It’s also where readers are begging for time skip but author wants to drag thing and shove chapters down their throat so that he can write few extra chapters at cost of quality over quantity.
Ok author you don’t know how many loopholes you have in the things you tried to explain. 1st Black pearl with everything you have it cannot be faster than sunny the 2nd ship of Luffy. If you tell otherwise you are trying to bluff yourself 2nd devil fruit I mean it’s your story. But even among zoan devil drift it’s lame. I mean did you forget how OP Luffy fruit is. He doesn’t stand a chance against future Luffy with that fruit. 3. Like I told you just don’t give better options and then choos lame one and then try to defend your actions. Instead don’t give better options. Learn to be smart working not hardworking.
And you still don’t understand the weakness of shockwave. The sword slash is also a kind of shockwaves. Meaning he is vulnerable to swordsman as well.
No no you did not just select a stupid lion fruit over all those awesome fruit just because he liked lions. This is a classic example of a person slashing on his own leg with a axe
If I am being honest here it feels like a kid is writing this novel. But for some reason it works for me. Not my fav novel out there but still a good read though
There are lot of things that drag the novel down 1. Mc seems like mastermind or at the least author tries to portray him as such. But the thing is that it's not realistic in the slightest and feels childish how easily he gets everything done. 2. His power is the one that makes the most impact for my 1star review. TRUE escanors power has a huge drawback. Making him a glass cannon like superman. And once you know his kryptonite even a normal human could kill him. Bur this is Naruto universe you know that you are weak in night. Then shouldn't you atheist learn something to save yourself. The dude enters war where he fights entire village in day and the village protects him during night. This is perhaps the stupidest use of espanol powers in Naruto. 3. It would be fine if escanor was a planet buster or invincible in Naruto universe. Then it would have made sense for him having such a huge weakness but he is not. There are many people and ways to seal or even kill him. And that is what makes his weakness frustrating. Especially when the Mc does nothing about his night weakness.
I still don't understand why ge would not train to become powerful in night. I am guessing he to has Chakra and should have each affinity. Why did he not train in the signature earth jutsu of onoki Instead you have made him a glass cannon similar to superman. As king has you have his kryptonite he is a weak chicken. Have to say not Abigail fan of this kind of weakness. Especially in a world like Naruto. Where even with his sunshine power he should not be the top existence.
Prime example of a asshole who steals other people's work and send has his. And don't even bother to correct anything or even pronounce names correct.
No this chapter socks. Why even give parents if you are going to take it. And if you are going to take it atleast use it as some kind of awakening
Hey Author if the Mc is so determined to keep his name and same looks and all because his parents gave it. Might as well wished for them to be reincarnated as well
Who the fuck is thunder God ray. Man if you are going to just copy paste others work as yours. Atheist have the decency to edit.
I mean seriously the dumbest Mc I have seen in all of one piece novels. A trash instead of nami and a nobody instead of hot robin. Seriously I feel like Mc head was kicked by a donkey
No offense but this chapter was stupid. He is 2 times stronger than itching. Not to mention he has susanoo. And you are telling me that he can't beat a vice admiral. Author you are underestimating the uchiha and overestimating the one piece vice admiral too much.
He is. Author mentioned it. And the fact that having such a powerful fruit and not working on it and instead playing swordsman blows my mind. Just how many swordsman are in his crew now. The funny thing is that since he also uses a sword or whatever it is called. Which is infection considered a sword according to wiki similar to whitebeard. Makes him a swordsman. Which means zero can never be world's strongest swordsman as if he is than that means he is stronger than luffy. Author still hasn't realized the loopholes he has caused. But it will be interesting what anime bs the author comes with.
Author I mean no offense. But what makes original luffy so good are his gears. The fact that despite knowing how cruel thw world is and he doesnt know what gears are and he still hasn't learned them makes me question his intelligence. Sure he uses a weapon and marine powers. But he feels like complete different character. And you should have gone for a original one instead by just giving him a different devil fruit instead. Because as of this point the rubber fruit is wasted on him. And with the powers he has in no way is he up to doffy level. Marine 6 powers are strong but without haki you can't cross that threshold. Bur again it's your novel I am just stating my opinion.