The beginning really sets the tone going forward, with really great writing quality and character design. You loathe some while adore others. It give me huge ' red wedding' vibes from game of thrones. And although it happened early in the story, I cared about these deaths and the effect it would have on the FMC. Overall solid foundation, can't wait for more writing from you!
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