Review Detail of f_bb44 in ZuoMeng: To Dream

Item: ZuoMeng: To Dream
Rating: 5

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To make the possession of Bai LiQin's body more ethical, perhaps the author could add a scene where YuQiao seeks permission from Bai LiQin's spirit before possessing her body. This could also add an interesting dynamic to the story and make it more unique.

ZuoMeng: To Dream

Sereinchoo

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SereinchooAuthorSereinchoo

Thanks for leaving a comment here (＾▽＾) I appreciate your feedback - let me rethink about the storyline because it expands and corelated with a lot of parts in the story and not something I can change easily.

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