If you want to know my story, then you must learn I'm one of the very few Outworlders who came to your world for miscellaneous reasons. No, not those angelic beings dawned from heaven to dictate divine decree, obviously. Well, my exterior was a big giveaway. I was just one of those poor saps that got thrust into your world when a crazy practitioner screwed around with higher-dimensional laws. - - - So, I've decided it's about time to leave the obligatory 5star review. First, this is a story where the protagonist ascends and becomes a godly figure. Also, I will not convince you to read this story. I think a couple of chapters are enough for you to know if the story is for you. It is easy going in the beginning, but has a gritty theme and a blend of grimdark and humour. If you're still not convinced, then stick around for the memes, banter, and the wifus. . . Now for the reasons you'd STAY AWAY from the story - No Murderhobo (but there will be apocalyptic fights) - No Cartoonish Villains (cuz this ain't for kids) - No System Window (cuz the author doesn't know numbers)
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LIKEI would like to say 1.5m words which would be closer to what I need to write everything I have in my mind. But from a business pov I would say around 1m mark. It could be more, it could be less.
hot_papichulo:Seems dope so far, so keep it up.how many chapter are u planning to write btw ?
EG0:I would like to say 1.5m words which would be closer to what I need to write everything I have in my mind. But from a business pov I would say around 1m mark. It could be more, it could be less.
T_Qin_Wushuang_T:hello author, it is a harem right ? and did you also right their night activities, you know. .. i will read this once i got an answer, thanks..
EG0:It is, and so far there's only a nightmare, but the book will have them eventually
EG0:It is, and so far there's only a nightmare, but the book will have them eventually
Sadly, I can do nothing for you. you have two choices: drop the book or keep on reading. tbh, I'm pretty sure your mindset won't change you don't like slice of life.
Jheydi327:Currently Chapter 10.. But all the Characters feels Bland and plain NGL.... All emotions feels like force.. Kinna bored reading this when MC speaks nonchalant..
Welp.. I kinda like the Slice of Life genre cause it's interesting.. But the emotions of every characters are plain, you might add some '?' or '!' and '!?' for some reaction to make the characters more like a living.. and execution of the story feels bland.. There's more things to improve
EG0:Sadly, I can do nothing for you. you have two choices: drop the book or keep on reading. tbh, I'm pretty sure your mindset won't change you don't like slice of life.
I don't like to use unnecessary signs, and I didn't know why you felt their exchange lifeless. first time getting criticism for that. Well, each human is unique, so your interpretation might be different from most people. But it's cool, for example, I have found the humour I like is insufferable to many.
Jheydi327:Welp.. I kinda like the Slice of Life genre cause it's interesting.. But the emotions of every characters are plain, you might add some '?' or '!' and '!?' for some reaction to make the characters more like a living.. and execution of the story feels bland.. There's more things to improve
KangGalon:Is the photo on the cover the original character in the novel or not? btw they are super coolimage
I mean before that they were really pleasing to the eye lol, of course also the cover that you are currently using
EG0:The current cover? Well, there is a purple haired girl, but she isn't that gleeful or happy
Hello. I just found your book, is there any yuri? I hate that stuff. Hope you can give me some info. Thanks
EG0:The current cover? Well, there is a purple haired girl, but she isn't that gleeful or happy
Daoist_Culture:Hello. I just found your book, is there any yuri? I hate that stuff. Hope you can give me some info. Thanks