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Review Detail of sugar_danny in Aimless Ascension

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32 Chapters in an I can say that it’s a well written story with great grammar. It’s not like other Chinese farmer novels, this story has a steady but clear development that is happening since chapter 1. World development is alright, not much to know though. The only thing I can really say for improvement is that there is a lack of emotion in the characters and they seem dull sometimes; other than that, it’s an interesting novel and I hope to see some more interesting events in the future.

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Ahh, just released a chapter and I think it has too much emotion at this point in the story. Anyway, I think I failed to develop any of the characters other than Gale in these few chapters. Well, the chapters are short, only about 40k words done, and more to come. Thanks for the review.