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So we’re in there like swimwear
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26 Chapters in and I can say that this deserves a lot of attention, the characters feel real and although Kai can be cold and emotionless, it doesn’t feel robotic; each character does not feel the same and have their own personalities which I find is lacking in other novels. The writing quality is great with no mistakes, it feels enjoyable to read. While the world background is a bit lacking, it’s still early in the story. Overall, everything is fantastic, I look forward for more excellent chapters. 👍👍
Lovin’ the story, haven’t spotted a good read in a while, however, although I understand this to be a fast-paced story, I find it being too fast. Everything moves ahead too quickly which leaves out potential to grow characters and their interaction. I hope the next story you make will be just as good quality and a bit slower-paced. Overall, great novel. [img=recommend][img=update]