Review Detail of Lull_321 in One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

I haven't read all yet, up till now it's pretty good and fine. But I think author isn't very good at adding emotion or expression into words, for example, the narration says that someone was shocked, but its just that, the follow up sentence doesn't feel like the character is shocked. And its really bad, I feel like reading bunch of words w/o emotion (seriously this is either bcos author really bad at it or I'm just reading to much book and journal for my thesis🥲)