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Lull_321

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I only use this account for review and comments, usually go incognito and read without account

2022-05-22 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Commented

    So he's also one eyed ghoul? maybe Eto younger brother (Eto is 27 yo)? or half-brother (which means full ghoul)?

    Kenzo Yoshimura, currently 22 years old, is the male offspring of the Ghoul of SSS class best known as Kuzen Yoshimura. Due to special circumstances, he ended up being adopted and spent his early years with a man who was not his biological father, but that was always something he kept in mind.
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    Rise of the Blood Raven
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Commented

    anyway cool pics you have in this chap

    [Image here]
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    Rise of the Blood Raven
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to SrCuervo

    so he don't have wings in this form?

    [Image here]
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    Rise of the Blood Raven
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Commented

    more like devil wings than crow 😂

    [Image here]
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    Rise of the Blood Raven
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Thehighest_throne2

    whats the original name?

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    P2W Uchiha in Konoha (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · Bleam
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to haytham_

    Thanks for your work man. Can I know is this a translation or not? Thank youu

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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    So far still good, I have a question, is this a translation or not. If yes, where can I read the RAW? Thank you 😉

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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    Awesome novel. The story is goin good, the plot is quite fresh though the idea actually pretty common with some regression and dungeons. I can only say good work and please don't drop this sir author, thank you for your hard work!

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    Global Awakening: I created the system
    Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    Why delete my previous review, its my honest review. What you author need is to improve from review not delete review below 4*. Next time you delete it I'll review 1* and its review war. I'll keep make new 1* review every time you delete mine😉 (I'm kinda people who keep grudge after all XD)

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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    I haven't read all yet, up till now it's pretty good and fine. But I think author isn't very good at adding emotion or expression into words, for example, the narration says that someone was shocked, but its just that, the follow up sentence doesn't feel like the character is shocked. And its really bad, I feel like reading bunch of words w/o emotion (seriously this is either bcos author really bad at it or I'm just reading to much book and journal for my thesis🥲)

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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    I know it's hard to write and improve but keep up sir author 👍PS: I might delete this and change my review after reading more if I have time.

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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    You think I wouldn't realize you deleted my review? what a joke. hear me, this author make his own novel, but then taking translated novel and just insert it w/o credit, ck ck ck

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Bleam

    Chapter 50, for pharmacist dou. And my bad, what I mean mixed up is the pronouns, like he she, though there's very few

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    P2W Uchiha in Konoha (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · Bleam
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    There's mtl translation by the name= Ninja World Mall: Akatsuki Organization’S Bounty Revealed At The Beginning

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    Original novel title 忍界商城:开局曝光晓组织悬赏金

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    I've seen hundreds of novel w exactly same ideas (like transmigrated novel, mostly wuxia), but at least they write it themselves, with their own words and effort. by thinking and not copy paste

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    if you want to write something with same idea from other novel just write it, no need to steal with exactly same words

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Replied to Lull_321

    Found it 忍界商城:开局曝光晓组织悬赏金

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    System World Mall
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    This novel is good, but bad translation, feels no difference with MTL. Usually when I read nyawdao it have pretty good translation or at least better than MTL. And sadly the real novel is dropped (already hiatus for soooo long)

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    One Piece Seat Void
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao3
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  • Lull_321
    Lull_3213mth
    Posted

    Honestly this is good, very good. But I just got a VERY STRONG feeling that this is TRANSLATED, that's why I give it 3 star. Some name got mixed, Kabuto written as Pharmacist Dou which is mostly found in chinese translated novel. If this is translation please at least give the source. Note: If this really translated then your translation is very good, thank you 👍

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    P2W Uchiha in Konoha (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · Bleam
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