Up to now, it's really good. Well, the only lacking in my opinion is the MC grow too fast, perhaps because too much time skip. Oh also character design/personality is kinda lacking but not bad. Anyway, thanks for the hardwork author ✌️

huh? he has kotoamatsukami?

So he's also one eyed ghoul? maybe Eto younger brother (Eto is 27 yo)? or half-brother (which means full ghoul)?

anyway cool pics you have in this chap

so he don't have wings in this form?

more like devil wings than crow 😂

whats the original name?

Thanks for your work man. Can I know is this a translation or not? Thank youu

So far still good, I have a question, is this a translation or not. If yes, where can I read the RAW? Thank you 😉

Awesome novel. The story is goin good, the plot is quite fresh though the idea actually pretty common with some regression and dungeons. I can only say good work and please don't drop this sir author, thank you for your hard work!

Why delete my previous review, its my honest review. What you author need is to improve from review not delete review below 4*. Next time you delete it I'll review 1* and its review war. I'll keep make new 1* review every time you delete mine😉 (I'm kinda people who keep grudge after all XD)

I haven't read all yet, up till now it's pretty good and fine. But I think author isn't very good at adding emotion or expression into words, for example, the narration says that someone was shocked, but its just that, the follow up sentence doesn't feel like the character is shocked. And its really bad, I feel like reading bunch of words w/o emotion (seriously this is either bcos author really bad at it or I'm just reading to much book and journal for my thesis🥲)

I know it's hard to write and improve but keep up sir author 👍PS: I might delete this and change my review after reading more if I have time.

You think I wouldn't realize you deleted my review? what a joke. hear me, this author make his own novel, but then taking translated novel and just insert it w/o credit, ck ck ck

Chapter 50, for pharmacist dou. And my bad, what I mean mixed up is the pronouns, like he she, though there's very few

There's mtl translation by the name= Ninja World Mall: Akatsuki Organization’S Bounty Revealed At The Beginning

Original novel title 忍界商城：开局曝光晓组织悬赏金

I've seen hundreds of novel w exactly same ideas (like transmigrated novel, mostly wuxia), but at least they write it themselves, with their own words and effort. by thinking and not copy paste

if you want to write something with same idea from other novel just write it, no need to steal with exactly same words

Found it 忍界商城：开局曝光晓组织悬赏金