Review Detail of JabbaDaButt in First Demonic Dragon

Read up to chapter 56, not terrible just spread way too thin. Bunch of characters and abilities and systems introduced one after another with almost no real time devoted to developing or explaining them. Classic Wish Fulfillment MC who goes from nobody to super OP god among men. A good example of what I mean by spread too thin is how only about 40 shortish chapters in, with barely any time devoted to developing his two wives he starts with. MC already has a new third wife and adopted her daughter. Make the core characters interesting and not just anime character stereotypes of “Buff Battle Maniac Girl” or “Silent library nerdy girl” or “Perverted Evil Young Master” make them seem like real people not just surface level personalities. Good luck to author though, has promise but I’ll be dropping