Review Detail of Natay93 in Queen Of Slaves

The story started off really sad with Kim's family losing a cherished loved one. But there was a lot of tension and resentment coming from Ma Jun towards his dad. Feeling that his dad didn't care about his family or didn't love him at all. Although the story was hard to follow at times I'd say what took away from the story was deaths after deaths. So many people died. And I'm not sure why. I get that Kim Shik was betrayed but the reason for being betrayed I still don't get it or I must've read over it. So Hyun at just a young age witnessed so much tragedy. She's practically dead inside. Now it's to the point were she doesn't feel anything. But Yong Chal Just wants a family. Which he though he gained when his mother married Kim Shik. To some extent he did. His happiness was just short lived due to his mother's and Kim Shiks death. This Story has a lot of potential. You just need to focus on your transition in an out of time frames and first second and third person should be better executed. Overall I'll give it 3.5 stars.