Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.
Peace_in_Chaos
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Real story
Thank you for your 5-star review reader!
harem?
Peace_in_Chaos:Thank you for your 5-star review reader!
There won't be a harem...
RainbowBeheader:harem?
nice
Peace_in_Chaos:There won't be a harem...
Will give this a try then.
Is there any romance
Yes
The_reader_ofnovel:Is there any romance
fake review