Review Detail of aleksandra_pano10 in military girl stuck with Mafia System

Well I think story can be improved better like I would give you to important advices: 1. Improve you grammar better. I know that sometimes it's hard ( I have problems with grammar to) but you can correct them using different apps. 2. Don't rush your story that it's really important. I can't say much about the MC because I feel story is rushed but it can be improved. Overall I think this story can be interesting if you improve these things Good luck author 🤞 P.S FL has a similar name as mine :)