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Review Detail of FIAMMA01 in Fight for the throne (THE MORNING STAR 一揽子清单)

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It starts off with an interesting pemise and builds up to the mystery surrounding lucy and her mother. The story even has magical elements that I didn't expect to see at all, so this should be pretty interesting........try using more dialoue and consistently sticking to one perspective to enhance your flow.

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Fight for the throne (THE MORNING STAR 一揽子清单)

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Liked it!

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