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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor1yrHikaruKiki

Hi everyone, this is my first novel so... may be it's have so many mistake or something unlogic. Yeah, I know that and I'm working hard to correcting them. Please... keep supporing me and leave the comment, I will fix it immediatly. ^^ (Don't quit this book just read 30 first chapters ._. )

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Misty World: Start with SSS skill

HikaruKiki

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Ashborn_
Ashborn_Lv4Ashborn_

keep up the good work but please don't pick up girls like pokemon and don't make the harem to big

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

Thks, I will try ^^

Ashborn_:keep up the good work but please don't pick up girls like pokemon and don't make the harem to big
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Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15Sinful_Cyanide

Will there be lemons?

LeBlorf
LeBlorfLv14LeBlorf

We can only hope.

Sinful_Cyanide:Will there be lemons?
Zakaria_Moh
Zakaria_MohLv4Zakaria_Moh

change I am the lord spnosis

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

what is spnosis?

Zakaria_Moh:change I am the lord spnosis
Bardock_witcher
Bardock_witcherLv3Bardock_witcher

I think he meant synopsis🤔

HikaruKiki:what is spnosis?
Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

Can I humbly ask you to recreate the novel after gaining enough experience?

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

Yeah ^^ I will try my best if I have time. Sorry for my bad ._.

Ancient_Egyptian:Can I humbly ask you to recreate the novel after gaining enough experience?
DaoistuFSwDO
DaoistuFSwDOLv1DaoistuFSwDO

I think this starts out as a very intriguing novel. I really like it so far. I can't wait for the next chapters. (note: I think there can be more girls in the harem)

tortle
tortleLv3tortle

do we have lemons? 😏

HikaruKiki:Yeah ^^ I will try my best if I have time. Sorry for my bad ._.
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

sometime =))) but after chapter 70, you will have more lemons =)))

tortle:do we have lemons? 😏
tortle
tortleLv3tortle

ok added to Library gd sir.

HikaruKiki:sometime =))) but after chapter 70, you will have more lemons =)))
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

well ._. thanks for your help ^^

tortle:ok added to Library gd sir.
DemonKingLv99999
DemonKingLv99999Lv2DemonKingLv99999

AUTHOR can you please 🙏 post a new discord link . previous one is not working

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

that is my private discord address ^^ you can talk to me through that link. I don't think people will like my book so I don't create any group for this book ._.

DemonKingLv99999:AUTHOR can you please 🙏 post a new discord link . previous one is not working
Asorath
AsorathLv13Asorath

Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

Hi Sukiyomi, soooo many people stoped reading and shouted at me that this is so stupid. But I won't fix it because it is the plot I want to build ^^. I know if I fix it, the readers will like it more. :D thanks for your remind ^^

Asorath:Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?
HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthorHikaruKiki

If you can read more, you will know why I leave a stupid plot like that ^^

Asorath:Author-San, can you fix the stat problem, I'm not trying to be mean here but how can a girl with over 2000 points in every stat can't kill a guy who absolute maximum star is 500?
Unsightly
UnsightlyLv1Unsightly

I have not read the novel but all the facts point to a stolen chinese novel

HikaruKiki:Hi Sukiyomi, soooo many people stoped reading and shouted at me that this is so stupid. But I won't fix it because it is the plot I want to build ^^. I know if I fix it, the readers will like it more. :D thanks for your remind ^^