Review Detail of Homeless_Traveler in Do not mess with a transmigrated and angsty otaku!

First of all, I'd say that introducing each character first before the start of the actual main story is quite unusual since in the usual practice the characters' depth are explored as the story progressed. Your writing is good, but assigning numbers on name is a bit confusing as people normally won't remember them quickly, so they had to return to previous chapters to remember. I'm looking forward to this work's successful future. Keep writing!