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Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

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Dear readers, Hello! I'm Homeless Traveler, a newcomer in creative writing!

2022-08-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    But the teacher said to exclude rune, incantation and magic circle?

    The first would be the incantations that summon spell circles.
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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    Bro, did you just experience a flood? Hope you're save

    Ch 10 Exposed
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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    This dialogue is a bit confusing...

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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    They who?

    "If I find it interesting enough, I might help you hide from the academy. They have already started the investigation to look for a dark creature" he smirked
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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio

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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posted

    The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)

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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Replied to Aira_Rin

    Thank you for your reviews!

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    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teen · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Replied to Rin_Nurnia

    Thank you so much for your reviews!

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    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teen · Homeless_Traveler
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posted

    The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!

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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posted

    The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!

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    The Deal With The Deviless
    Fantasy · BLACK_LIGHT_
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    I think you also need to put 'abusive content warning' at the start of this chapter

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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    I wonder why the police didn't take the kids to psychologists...

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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    This might be a wild idea, but I think a predator is scarier than a predictor...

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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Replied to Zieve1

    Thank you for your reviews! :D

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    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teen · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posted

    I must say that I haven't read a story like this ever in my life. Moreover, the writing is very neat, so I could enjoy the story smoothly. Looking forward to how the story will turn out!

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    钱花光了
    Sports · Zieve1
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Replied to appricotblossom

    you're welcome!

    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
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    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantasy · appricotblossom
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    looking good, i see

    Ch 24 Journey, II
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    Absolute Transcendent: Dimension Traverse
    Fantasy · ItsHashi
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented
    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
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    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantasy · appricotblossom
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commented

    Still some punctuation errors here and there. Hope it gets better next chapter

    Ch 9 Undeserved Revenge
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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

    thank you for your reviews, kind reader! :D

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    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teen · Homeless_Traveler
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