Review Detail of Sweatysausage in MCU: Skull and Bones
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You should probably learn to read and write before you try and give your dogš© take on anything. Nowhere in my story do I mention wordcount, so stop lying.
hero4hire:according to author its to increase the wordcount since he think only showing mc pov will end the arc in a single chapter. What does that say about mc and his uselessness to the plot if even side character have better storyline than him, not to mention all that stroylines are movie script copy-paste without any brain from author.
according to author its to increase the wordcount since he think only showing mc pov will end the arc in a single chapter. What does that say about mc and his uselessness to the plot if even side character have better storyline than him, not to mention all that stroylines are movie script copy-paste without any brain from author.
But seriously man, it's really messing up the story. Stop with the POV's. He's just angry at the fact that you have potential but you're ruining it by doing something that can easily be fixed. We're reading the fanfic because we know the material well. No need to write entire chapters restating what we already know. Just gloss over it briefly to let us know the situation and focus on the MC please. Good luck and hope you listen as you can be great. I laughed a few times at some of the MC's comments, I have faith in my dude!
Swarthy:You should probably learn to read and write before you try and give your dogš© take on anything. Nowhere in my story do I mention wordcount, so stop lying.image