Review Detail of Mithren in The Whole World Was Watching, But I Forgot It Was A Game!

First off I want to say that this is an interesting story. That said... It is not without it's flaws. The amnesia is not explained well and leaves one feeling a great sense of "plot armor". To those who get hung up on "things that don't make sense" this may ruin the story for you. If on the other hand you can get past that and just enjoy the story it's not too bad. I don't know if the writing improves past chapter 40 but I think that this is a good relaxed read for those who are looking for it.