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Review Detail of Slothiticus in DC: Gotham's Spider-Man

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Slothiticus
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immediately within the first two actual chapters this novel is surprisingly aweful. It has zero character development rushes through what little plot it has while needlessly being racist. It shows no genuine respect or care for the fiction it uses(marvel) by makeing the fiction characters act way out of their personality. If I could rate in the negatives I would this is a disgrace to all the people on this site that actually try to write decent stories.

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DC: Gotham's Spider-Man

LordOrpheus

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BlindCrown
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he's speaking in simplified English not in traditional :D

CephJester:*right... But the previous sentence should have been "correct English" and not "right English".
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LordOrpheus
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you dont no real art lol

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Slothiticus
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If this is what you consider real art that I'm glad I dont.

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
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KumaKumaDaoist
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didn't believe you but after I read it I think I need to wipe my memory It really makes the character of MCU dumb and ooc

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NightOwl_Soren
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There's racism in this?

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NightOwl_Soren
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Yep, there's implied racism in this.

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Estrenger_HK
Estrenger_HKLv1Estrenger_HK

Lol delete this or remake this so bad,u no can continue this novel Marvel

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
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BaBaDoOk_14
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You don't know right English lol

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
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LordOrpheus
LordOrpheusAuthorLordOrpheus

write** dummy

BaBaDoOk_14:You don't know right English lol
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KumaKumaDaoist
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OMG the confidence to correct him and still be wrong

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
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Silva2B
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I’m not gonna read this, was just checking reviews but I thought it was funny for someone to expect character development within 2 chapters. Not defending whether this story is bad or not since I’m not planning on reading this.

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LordOrpheus
LordOrpheusAuthorLordOrpheus

rong*

KumaKumaDaoist:OMG the confidence to correct him and still be wrong
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One_BelowAll
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you’re definitely a troll

LordOrpheus:rong*
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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv13Slothiticus

introducing a character is apart of the characters development as it establishes a baseline to build on what I am talking about is that there was no decent baseline established the story attempted to rush head first into whatever unpleasant series of events that I believe were attempts at plot.

Silva2B:I’m not gonna read this, was just checking reviews but I thought it was funny for someone to expect character development within 2 chapters. Not defending whether this story is bad or not since I’m not planning on reading this.
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BaBaDoOk_14
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idiot

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
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CephJester
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*wrong

LordOrpheus:rong*
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CephJester
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*know

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
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CephJester
CephJesterLv2CephJester

*right... But the previous sentence should have been "correct English" and not "right English".

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

You can’t even right one sentence correctly, so I doubt that it’s art

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
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