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Missy_Castillo
Missy_CastilloLv101yrMissy_Castillo

I liked the plot, it gives us the glimpse of the horrible effects of war, causing families to torn apart and the trauma that the young childen has to go through. Although, I think the paragraphs are too long, some readers tend to skip long chaps. Also, I got lost sometimes in the middle of dialogue tags but overall the story has feels to it. Lastly, I kind of wanting to know how the two brothers cope up in those 5 years after losing their father. This is a good read! đŸ‘đŸ»

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Unnecessary Capes

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Missy_Castillo
Missy_CastilloLv10Missy_Castillo

i mean long paragraphs*

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AntiTeoSensaiAuthorAntiTeoSensai

I appreciate the honest feedback it will help me get better at writing . I've been working to improve my writing with each chapter. I'll definitely try to improve the dialogue tags to make the conversations easier to follow. Thanks for the review! and I'm glad you enjoyed.