AntiTeoSensai
An up and coming author, bringing you my first webnovel : Unnecessary Capes. About a young boy who loses his father at a young age and comes to terms with it.
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This story has a deep and romantic feeling to it, the opening chapter really set the scene of the world in a way that I truly enjoyed . I usually don't read novels of this genre, but this one is great and I definitely recommend that people give it a read. 5 out of 5 rating! This is some quality writing and I loved every second of it.
So far I'm 7 chapters in and I'm loving this story. The transition from the regular an entirely different fantasy world truly felt like I was entering a whole new place. Your descriptions of the characters and environments form a picture of each one. I feel concern and stress for the main character Gala, and I want to see her succeed at returning to her normal. There are only small parts of the story that could use a little proofreading, but they were almost unnoticeable and didn't take away from the experience. Overall I love this story!
It's a mystery that will be revealed later on in the story, her age will be somewhat important.