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AntiTeoSensai

AntiTeoSensai

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An up and coming author, bringing you my first webnovel : Unnecessary Capes. About a young boy who loses his father at a young age and comes to terms with it.

2022-07-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Commented

    I love the world building so far , it makes me want to see where you go with the concepts that you introduced in the first chapter 馃檪

    Ch 1 Episode 1 - Another Day
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    I love how you have portrayed grief and loss in a realistic way. The first three chapters establish the theme very early on, and I can't help but feel sorry for the main character. I really enjoy the romanticism and sadness this story feeds to the viewer. I very much enjoyed reading this novel!

    A New Marriage For Young Miss
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    After the first couple of chapters I waw already hooked! Magenta's ability is very interesting and I really wonder what the limits of it are. I really hate the mother character already for making Magenta's life a living helll. I can't wait to see what's next!

    CLOSE YOUR EYES
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    This story has a deep and romantic feeling to it, the opening chapter really set the scene of the world in a way that I truly enjoyed . I usually don't read novels of this genre, but this one is great and I definitely recommend that people give it a read. 5 out of 5 rating! This is some quality writing and I loved every second of it.

    BLACK KNIGHT: The CEO guards her
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    So far I'm 7 chapters in and I'm loving this story. The transition from the regular an entirely different fantasy world truly felt like I was entering a whole new place. Your descriptions of the characters and environments form a picture of each one. I feel concern and stress for the main character Gala, and I want to see her succeed at returning to her normal. There are only small parts of the story that could use a little proofreading, but they were almost unnoticeable and didn't take away from the experience. Overall I love this story!

    Galatea: The Last Whisperer
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Replied to Missy_Castillo

    I appreciate the honest feedback it will help me get better at writing . I've been working to improve my writing with each chapter. I'll definitely try to improve the dialogue tags to make the conversations easier to follow. Thanks for the review! and I'm glad you enjoyed.

    Unnecessary Capes
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Replied to Missy_Castillo

    It's a mystery that will be revealed later on in the story, her age will be somewhat important.

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    Unnecessary Capes
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Commented

    I can't wait for the next chapter, it's started to get interesting. I wonder how this "agreement" will work out in the end. He seems to be up to something.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Rebel's Mark
    The Blood Wars: B 1
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    I love the direction this story is going in! 5 chapters went by so quickly reading this series, and I definitely plan on continuing reading this novel. I love how the werewolf society operates!

    The Blood Wars: B 1
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    The concept is very interesting! I'm already three chapters in and I plan to catch up on this series, Demonic rising has a dark atmosphere, and it works great with the themes of the story.

    demonic rising
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    I enjoy the style of this novel, I can really 'feel' the world the family is living in. It's similar to watching a movie, Great work! I'm no professional or anything, but I enjoyed the first chapter!

    Lycans Book 1 - Saved From The Wolves
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Replied to Azure04

    Thank you for the support!

    Unnecessary Capes
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Commented

    I'm enjoying the story so far, there are a few mistakes , but you're slowly improving. Keep it up!

    Ch 4 Martial Arts Club
    Martial Arts System
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  • AntiTeoSensai
    AntiTeoSensai1yr
    Posted

    I'm usually not into slice of life but the first two chapters have been surprisingly great, I want to know what happens next so I'll continue reading.

    HALF A HEART
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