Review Detail of Hit30 in One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Harem?

In your title is the first mistake, in your sypnosis are some others

thanks man,can you tell the mistake i make synopsis

You wrote "young* big, first mistake

and the other is where your wrote "he" big Fix those, as for me personaly the sypnosis is very important, if I see some mistakes there I normaly dont even read the story😁 Glad you take other helps and improve your story

fix it bro, thanks for pointing out the mistakes

One piece... Not harem 🤣 Seriously, it matters little harem or no harem. The premise is to make a good story. Stats are written in the middle of the chapters, that looks horrible. Write auxiliary chapters for stats, skills... Author, the system you write sucks and worst of all is the personality you gave it. It was better not to give it personality or not to have a system.

okay thanks for telling me you thoughts 🙂

will he be in luffys crew

no

Well, it didn't bother me much the stats I actually like to constantly look at the stat for the info, but that could just be me if you do decide to move them, maybe you could try doing at least one stat at the end or the beginning of the chapter. This is just me talking. Really though, I would stick with what you feel comfortable for you and your story.

Will there be romance? If yes, will the female lead be an OC or an already existing character?

yes, there will be but later in the story

It would be good if there's no romance cause I think the girl well just be a burden. It's good if the fml is at least strong enough to protect herself and no scene where she become a deadweigh to the mc cause it's frustrating to read if that happen.

Is the MC a selfless hero? Like rushing in to save some random without knowing context or without having a plan? Or will he be the type that will kill to protect and save

second one