Review Detail of Missy_Castillo in The Destiny Daughter

The plot is too fast-paced without the proper world background and characters were not described in details. How does everyone looked like? I was greatly astounded that the first chapter was one whole paragraph but was relieved when the next chapter was in proper format already. There were some grammar mistakes but you can still follow through the context. Lastly, why I feel like there's a small trace of light fantasy going on with the book with Eva's kiss? Anyway, this is a good read.