Review Detail of Iqfauli in Destroying My Own Novel
Review detail
So many have been asking if this novel has a harem, and the simple answer is yes there is. The harem has not started yet as I wrote this review and up to 60 chapters. It's not like any harem where you immediately get surrounded by girls and they are fine to be his woman. I made the relationship with each woman from nothing and up to becoming his woman like how a real womanizer does. Some are slow and steady some are immediate because he knows how to treat the woman and how to approach them. Sorry for the self-review in my own book which I have never done before but I want to clarify this question with this review.
Destroying My Own Novel
Iqfauli
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Mr_Black_01:Then We Will Be Waiting For it Dear Author , Hope We Will Not Have to Wait Longer ...
the first chapter says otherwise about the harem author...they are following him like a dog with no personalities if it is a glimpse of the future.
Iqfauli:I'm not sure. I don't want to stretch the story but after thinking about how the story progress, it might take hundreds of chapters and not thousands.
The prologue is the introduction of Asmond and Mykel, who they are, how long they know each other, what kind of relationship they have. The betrayal is obvious and that's the point of the story. You can see he's manipulating Asmond but I'm not revealing if Mykel really working with the demons or not. Is Mykel telling the truth in the whole conversation or not? Nobody knows. You can't find the answer before you read the whole story, and it's also the same to how and why those women are in there even though they're not the main focus in the prologue since I don't want to reveal too much information. To answer your question, are those women are nothing but a dog? Who knows, read the story and if you don't like it then it's not meant for you.
tortle:the first chapter says otherwise about the harem author...they are following him like a dog with no personalities if it is a glimpse of the future.
K I'll give it a try, also what I mean by women behaved Like dogs is how all of them were kissing and licking him...If you are saying that they would have their personalities then no women with some self respect will do it with more than 3 womens at a time, including the fact that they were the so called daughters of demon kings or whatever. First impression of the novel was ruined because of such scene anyways, I'll definitely give it a try...maybe I am wrong.
Iqfauli:The prologue is the introduction of Asmond and Mykel, who they are, how long they know each other, what kind of relationship they have. The betrayal is obvious and that's the point of the story. You can see he's manipulating Asmond but I'm not revealing if Mykel really working with the demons or not. Is Mykel telling the truth in the whole conversation or not? Nobody knows. You can't find the answer before you read the whole story, and it's also the same to how and why those women are in there even though they're not the main focus in the prologue since I don't want to reveal too much information. To answer your question, are those women are nothing but a dog? Who knows, read the story and if you don't like it then it's not meant for you.
I personally think that demon isn't like a human. They lack of common sense and morality, they express themselves in whatever they want it to be, especially after knowing they're Mykel's. That's why talking about morality while the subject is a demon is a bit weird don't you think?
tortle:K I'll give it a try, also what I mean by women behaved Like dogs is how all of them were kissing and licking him...If you are saying that they would have their personalities then no women with some self respect will do it with more than 3 womens at a time, including the fact that they were the so called daughters of demon kings or whatever. First impression of the novel was ruined because of such scene anyways, I'll definitely give it a try...maybe I am wrong.
that only applies for low level demons from what I have read in multiple fantasy novels...High class demons cares alot about there reputation especially there pride. But I guess its your book, your choice can't talk muc.
Iqfauli:I personally think that demon isn't like a human. They lack of common sense and morality, they express themselves in whatever they want it to be, especially after knowing they're Mykel's. That's why talking about morality while the subject is a demon is a bit weird don't you think?
btw I read 10 or so chps...I am liking most of the things but One thing put me off and what seemed to me was forced is, him saving two girls and their mother. At one point he was chilling with cigarette in between chaos and suddenly starts panicking in saving them...His will was portrayed so weak, I mean what did he imagine? He's going to see wholesome moments between demons and human during breakout...Also him having hero complex didn't suit the theme like how he doesn't cares about anyone only sees his benefits till now, even stealing original mc's heroine as well as bullying him using others to manipulate him...so He's basically a villain and him saving them was totally forced. At first I thought maybe they are daughters and wife someone important in the story so maybehe's just manipulating the facts to further help him in future but they never get mentioned again afterwards.
Iqfauli:I personally think that demon isn't like a human. They lack of common sense and morality, they express themselves in whatever they want it to be, especially after knowing they're Mykel's. That's why talking about morality while the subject is a demon is a bit weird don't you think?
but will those things aside I think this has alot of potential and with a few changes it can get alot more better too...I am definitely continuing for now, also you can have both my stones for today lol
Iqfauli:I personally think that demon isn't like a human. They lack of common sense and morality, they express themselves in whatever they want it to be, especially after knowing they're Mykel's. That's why talking about morality while the subject is a demon is a bit weird don't you think?
That's true, but why do you think those demon kings' daughters decided to lower their pride to Mykel? Nobody knows until you read the story. That's why I don't want to reveal it too much because it won't be fun.
tortle:that only applies for low level demons from what I have read in multiple fantasy novels...High class demons cares alot about there reputation especially there pride. But I guess its your book, your choice can't talk muc.
tortle:btw I read 10 or so chps...I am liking most of the things but One thing put me off and what seemed to me was forced is, him saving two girls and their mother. At one point he was chilling with cigarette in between chaos and suddenly starts panicking in saving them...His will was portrayed so weak, I mean what did he imagine? He's going to see wholesome moments between demons and human during breakout...Also him having hero complex didn't suit the theme like how he doesn't cares about anyone only sees his benefits till now, even stealing original mc's heroine as well as bullying him using others to manipulate him...so He's basically a villain and him saving them was totally forced. At first I thought maybe they are daughters and wife someone important in the story so maybehe's just manipulating the facts to further help him in future but they never get mentioned again afterwards.
I just read it author but my point still stands... because author didn't helped them because he already know about them, he did it out of goodwill. So Everything I said still stands and it doesn't suit his character at all.
Iqfauli:It will be mentioned again. You can read the title of chapter 20 :)
He was having an existential crisis because even though those characters weren't real, they looked real to him. It was described in one of the paragraphs when he questioned himself why he was scared and anxious in the first place after he leveled up his [Mind-Stability] skill. Although it was kind of off from his character, he was still a normal human being. So, the moment he got his [Mind-Sability] skill, he went back on track and back to his usual self.
tortle:I just read it author but my point still stands... because author didn't helped them because he already know about them, he did it out of goodwill. So Everything I said still stands and it doesn't suit his character at all.
that's not the main thing...why would he save people over going to fight with demons faster inside the tower is what I was saying...that was very out of character but i guess whatever.
Iqfauli:He was having an existential crisis because even though those characters weren't real, they looked real to him. It was described in one of the paragraphs when he questioned himself why he was scared and anxious in the first place after he leveled up his [Mind-Stability] skill. Although it was kind of off from his character, he was still a normal human being. So, the moment he got his [Mind-Sability] skill, he went back on track and back to his usual self.
tortle:that's not the main thing...why would he save people over going to fight with demons faster inside the tower is what I was saying...that was very out of character but i guess whatever.
Iqfauli:That's true, but why do you think those demon kings' daughters decided to lower their pride to Mykel? Nobody knows until you read the story. That's why I don't want to reveal it too much because it won't be fun.
