Review Detail of funkiller_562 in Subduing The Devil Overlord

Writing quality is great! I love how the first chapter began, introducing the characters and giving us little details about their personalities was a genius idea. I love the pace work and the story flows very well with your choice of words. What I noticed is your inability to describe with all five senses but that did not ruin your writing in anyway. It's like a standard fairytale with well thought of descriptions and engaging conversations. I also feel the conversations should be separated from the paragraphs not buried in them. It makes it a little hard to tell who's talking. But it's an awesome story, one I presume will have a blossoming fanbase in the future. Supposing it has about ≈300-700 chapters.