Review Detail of Crazy_Ume in Subduing The Devil Overlord

Interesting story! Feels just like a fairytale! Love the fantasy bit on the MC's design such as silver hair and stuff The writing is pretty detailed, it made me feel like I was watching a movie. Great job! Although it could use some alterations like different choices of words here and there to match the setting of the story but overall it's still great! Keep up the good work, fellow author! 💪💖