Review Detail of Salmon_El_Solomon in Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

A great novel, whit a great Development this is nice piece of art. Just the development of the love of aushima an elandor the in the travel is very sudden, i recommend a rewrite whit a longer chapters, in that chapters elandor and aushima need to develop the relationship whit a distant start, elandor doing a slow brainwashing and the slow approximation between them, that it will be more realistic and better than the actual short. Ps: in need the link of the portrait. Ps 2.0: sorry for the bad English I'm an Argentinian :)