If you want more views or more power stones, you need to put your efforts in 1 novel, personally the one who like me more of all it's this. Next try to make longer chapters , and then wait to reach 100 - 130 chapters, it's when all of the novel got their grow up. If you want to read something, when it hace a few dozen it make less interesting, but you can compense whit longer chapter of you want to make more whit lees chapter's.
No no no, if you read right, all the others names are correct, only the mc is wrong, the mc is the only Xiao Lin in the Malfoy family
I don't want to offend anyone is my opinion. Shit novel whit a shit translation, what do you expect? Remember this is a translation. Character design is a shit. Character development is a shit. World development is a shit. Interaction between the characters is a shit.
I loose is worse literally is worse he is the son of Narcisa Black and Lucius Malfoy,both Britain and his name is Xiao Lin... Just imagine how shit will be the novel
I can bet all my money that the name of the original is something like Xiao Malfoy or something Chinese, but he is the son of Narcisa and Lucius
Honestly speaking, I don't want to offend or insult anyone, this is just my opinion. This sucks, it is literally and exactly the same as the original, although it barely changes, but in the end there is no difference, this is so exact that the mc is the same as the same actions, in the end we have a pathetic Japanese beta mc. He has the power to do what he wants but in the end he is a little dog just like the original mc in the book, the girls' interactions with the mc, everyone's attitude to the mc and the mc's interactions with the world suck, they are the same to the original, this cannot be considered ff, at most it is a summary of the original, because what covers 200 chaps in the other this one covers in 20, that is the difference. so for me its a solid 1 star, 0 story developement, 0 character design and 0 world background. i only put 1 star because i can't put 0
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Although I don't like the novel, the one punch man side is easy to understand, the thing is one punch man in the manga has a loot of chapters , but if you put it in a novel it's only about 60- 70 chapters because in one punch are a lot of images of the fights and scenes, who in the text can be resumed in one o le two paragraphs.
I don't plan to insult or offend anyone it's just my point of view. Sincerely this sucks for me, the mc and the situation around him feels to stupid, like he isn't being able to use correctly the power of light being born from the strongest angel (this is Canon) and a seraph no else. And don't mention the intelligence and actions of the mc, a grown man reborned... The interaction between characters and the MC really sucks, the "development" of the mc too. If the mc was born from a low angel and the mc has mental problems all will have sense, whit the things being as now the story sucks
This is my opinion and I don't want to offend or insult anyone. This is no better than a mtl, for an example, the fucking MC, is a Chinese reborn in a Japanese familiy,in Japan, and the fucking name is Chinese...
No, the thing is you're incredibly retarded, because you don't know the difference between fanfic and wishfullfilment novel. This is clearly a poor quality fanfic, what you describe is a wishfullfilment. And you also don't know what a Time skip is, a time skip is used to skip a stage that is going to be repetitive and with little improvement, like a time in which the mc trains and only does that. (which then little by little can show the results of training and new techniques). A very bad time skip is like the one this author uses, he trains, meets people and has all his revenge all in a time skip. Another thing is that a fanfic is used to CHANGE the original world and create its own version, clearly something that does not happen here, many changes and too many things happen on a large scale, but the "Original Story" remains, something that would not make sense with the things that the MC is doing. I invite you to inform yourself about something like the theory of the "Butterfly Effect". Something very interesting, but I think it is beyond your intellectual level.
I don't plan to offend or insult anyone, it's just my opinion. I honestly couldn't get through chapter 10 (it may be unfair but I honestly couldn't). The MC feels too dumb, the characters feel like NPCs not sentient beings, and I'm not talking about "game npc's". Not only that, but the concept he develops into feels too stupid.
You have understand that now, for your information all of Akikan ff are Chinese fan fiction, only whit the name of the protagonist changed and some minor details like mannerisms and some phrases like youre counting death or the red gifts and so