Review Detail of lordlighthh in I Became The Pope, Now What?

It is a solid 3 . The novel is not bad but suffers from inconsistency . The author wants to turn it into a dark adventure but he is incapacitated of it . His characters are immature and incapable of committing . For instance, MC promises to be serious towards his training after he gets back , what does he do ? Starts making latex and bra, bringing his friends to training when he should be training and random stuff..... It doesn't feel like he is living in a cruel world rather in Alice the wonderland .