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DreamThree
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A hidden gem. Writing Quality: Smooth. Almost zero grammatical errors, and the rhyms are clear, crisp and with good phrasing. they don't break emersion from the story. Stability of Updates: Long chapters, 1ch/d as of writing this review. Author has said that he will increase it in the coming weeks. Story Development: Unexpectedly Interesting. Set in the medieval era with magic, church and knights, it's a fresh take on an old genre. Worth reading. Character Design: Strong. MC was an old man in his previous life and is reborn as an infant in a fantasy world. He has the wit of an old man, and the curiosity of a newborn. The side character add flesh to the novel. World Background: Stable. Author has it all planned, and the writing style gives clear visualisation of the novel world. I also like the fact that author makes the language of the world something other than english, which most of the authors fail to consider or just don't bother. Language is a big factor in creating the realism in needed.

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I Became The Pope, Now What?

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lordlighthh
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You are only right about one thing and that is good writing quality. Story is of typical character with plot armour .... Plot armour is way over used. He is not smart at all. He risks himself for no reason and gets used by church while getting nothing in return. Then " must abstain" BS . Have read till 250 and I

MisterImmortal
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Arigatou Gozaimasu!

Unconscious_Truth1
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It's MisterImmortal so...🤷

honesh_reddy
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hey author how come your not updating harry potter ???

MisterImmortal:Arigatou Gozaimasu!
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UnwantedRavenKing
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I just read all the chapters and I just want more. Continue as you do with the speed of the plot and the development of the characters because for my part I love the progressions not too fast and with lots of adventures. Your book reminds me of paper fantasy books, which I really appreciate. Just please don't abandon the book in the middle or start skipping part of the plot to push the story forward too fast. I will support you with my stones.

MisterImmortal:Arigatou Gozaimasu!
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MisterImmortal
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Thank you. I don't plan on abandoning anytime. I like to complete my books no matter what. And I have stuff planned all the way until he sits on the throne(Roughly planned until the end of the book). So there is no need to have filler arcs. Hence, I will not be bored while writing. I'm glad you enjoy it.

UnwantedRavenKing:I just read all the chapters and I just want more. Continue as you do with the speed of the plot and the development of the characters because for my part I love the progressions not too fast and with lots of adventures. Your book reminds me of paper fantasy books, which I really appreciate. Just please don't abandon the book in the middle or start skipping part of the plot to push the story forward too fast. I will support you with my stones.
Pumaz
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You like monke’s

MisterImmortal:Arigatou Gozaimasu!
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Typical herem readers 👆👆😘😘🙄🙄🙄🙄

lordlighthh:You are only right about one thing and that is good writing quality. Story is of typical character with plot armour .... Plot armour is way over used. He is not smart at all. He risks himself for no reason and gets used by church while getting nothing in return. Then " must abstain" BS . Have read till 250 and I