Review Detail of Hoinheim in Blood Titan System

Mehn, I tried. I really did. I managed to get past 150 chapters. I tried holding on but man, this book could do way better. The writing quality is terrible, repeating chapters, mixed chapters, wrong character names, terrible explanation of events. It feels more like the author is trying to fill up chapters and repeats a lot of already known info. The current 206 chaps can literally be fit int 80 chaps. The story line is great but the author had ruined it. I hope you revise your work or pls pay someone to do that for you. Thanks