Hoinheim
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Hoinheim5dCommentedHarder than Fish scales duhh
'The scales, they were about three times harder, just like the hardness of a metal.'- Hoinheim3mthCommented
Can you jump in space?
Varian jumped back, apparently not intending to fight them at their rythm. But they followed up, not intending to let him turn the game around. - Hoinheim4mthPosted
lol I know I made a comment before on this book about how bad it was. TBH, if you don’t follow this book, you would dislike it because of the mcs growth rate but only after you understand his back story in the 300th ish chapters would you understand why it is. I didn’t like it at first but now I think it’s aii. You should give it a try
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Where a terabyte of RAM. If I could lay my hands on that my goodness.
But all those precautions were overkill since the server he bought was a very quiet one; it features dual Intel Xeon processors, with a terabyte of RAM and ten two-terabyte SAS hard drives in RAID 10 configuration for storage. - Hoinheim5mthCommentedCh 1312 Technique Principles
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No a third meaning they were 12 and he killed 4 already so 8more to go
'Eight more to go…' - Hoinheim5mthCommented
Omo na you o. Dad dies due to car accident - check Mum dies giving birth to you - check You are born disabled - check All that’s left now is for you to be poor and ugly on top of all this
I could call out to my butler to help me up, but what was the point? As if losing my father to a car accident and having my mother die during my own birth was not bad enough, I had to be born disabled too. - Hoinheim5mthReplied to EveEUktrahi11
My thoughts exactly
No matter how much pressure he applied, the blood had still gushed between his fingers and oozed. - Hoinheim5mthPosted
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The book is pretty good. It’s the kind of book you read while waiting for your main 📕 chapters to be uploaded. The grammatical structure is great. I give kudos to the author for the world building and cultural settings, it’s so 2023 and I could relate to it. The author unfortunately doesn’t expound on the training fights as much as I would like. Leaves my imagination wanting. Currently I’m 56chapters in. So this is all I can say for now. Good job author.
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I hate it when they shout out their skills
"Kaizer Sword Art First Form…," Lux shouted as he charged at the Shield Warrior who had already raised his shield up to meet him. "Piercing the Heavens!" - Hoinheim6mthCommented
Now I understand the meaning of second best system. It means he will never be better than the original owner of the talent
[Talent Mark: 0 (23:59 hours remaining)] - Hoinheim7mthCommented
I could swear that out of all the mods, stone tail was the least appealing option
This paragraph has been deleted. - Hoinheim8mthCommented
Lool am I the only one that noticed that the three books were supposed to be really thick? How could he read them so fast?
'It took long… too long to defeat them. By the end of it, entire lands were uprooted and countless lives were lost, but the demons were finally wiped out. So was their description and history.' - Hoinheim9mthCommented
You just get reincarnated and the first thing you hear is about getting your head sliced open and being brainwashed 🤣🤣.
Brainwashing? - Hoinheim9mthPosted
Mehn, I tried. I really did. I managed to get past 150 chapters. I tried holding on but man, this book could do way better. The writing quality is terrible, repeating chapters, mixed chapters, wrong character names, terrible explanation of events. It feels more like the author is trying to fill up chapters and repeats a lot of already known info. The current 206 chaps can literally be fit int 80 chaps. The story line is great but the author had ruined it. I hope you revise your work or pls pay someone to do that for you. Thanks
- Hoinheim10mthReplied to Mr_Babbles
Bruhhhh, did you try it out before you typed this? It’s not the same.
Although the exercise itself was pretty easy, it was time-consuming. Not only that but caution needed to be taken every time I did it. For the sole reason that not only did it make me look ever so slightly insane to look in a single direction over and over repeatedly. But if Cinyah or Riker saw me doing it, they may confuse my little workout for a seizure or stroke. That; And it made me dizzy as hell. - Hoinheim11mthReplied to Mithren
Blurring in this case might just mean he would make him think its someone else that made the purchase and not the same person all the time. He didn’ t say he made him forget the purchase
Of course, in order to avoid Roland's suspicion, he also blurred Roland's memory with magic so that it wouldn't be leaked. After all, trust was trust, but he couldn't lose the necessary caution.