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darkgoddess1
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so far i really enjoyed the reading. it's all we can expect from this niche and a bit more. the world building has a nice touch but the lore even though it's well made with reassured background and foundation to be explored it is also lacking a bit of touch, i mean we had glimpses about certain topics but like the demons spawn or their activities we only heard them now (200ish) but I also can understand a bit the author wants to keep leading to finish in a fast paced way the overview of the first continent and that's ok but it also lacks understanding of those forces and their mindset... i mean the psique of characters, it's like they're robots doing stuff. there's no interaction beyond accomplishing tasks. There's no depth to their psique, I'm including side characters and mc himself. but it's funny bc those grandmasters were well made and the emperor as well. every chapter made to acomodate those people were funny and full of nice expectations but the rest are only robots accomplishing tasks without much of a interaction. the slave with red hair was introduced with so much details in the first shopping spree I thought I would see her doing stuff but after that she just greets the guests. and last but not least I must say the way the author made the culture of plundering and greedy behavior for resources was spectacular. it was stablished systemativaly and a sort of justification not the same info dump all cultivation novel writes. there's some sort of resonance and you could see the "rules" there's no hypocrisy because everyone blooded their hands to get there and iit's understandable. it's just some insights of myself please hope you don't mind. keep it up 🙂

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darkgoddess1
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that's okay though. you keep improving and it's visible. who knows maybe someday you revisit it and publish on Amazon or smth. I'd buy it. must add: the plots and schemes are marvelous. the tension was high during those chaps.

VOID_:I'm getting your point about the Major characters being 1D, I'm working in it. Just realizing that the training arc could've been SO much more.
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THIS IS LOVELY!!!!

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I'm getting your point about the Major characters being 1D, I'm working in it. Just realizing that the training arc could've been SO much more.