just some young master losing face, wining face. woman beauties. slaopping more faces. therapy would be a game changer in Chinese culture

I'm at 322 chapter and holder of bad news. Author really is destroying this masterpiece. I remember when I first started reading, it only had like 100 chaps, but the pacing and chapter lengths were insanely good, the story has such good cliffs and keep building a nice world. But these last 60-70 chaps, the author really is turning this novel with great potential into horse shit. I don't know what to say anymore. It's getting too annoying.

i won't cry i won't cry I won't cry

omg this cliff

thanks for the chapter. this new arc is soo good

LOL 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

thanks for the chapter. now I'll stack a bit untill this arc ends

He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named

I'm really anxious about the war domain

missing such a nice story. all the elements we search in fantasy-reincarnation-magic world are there. sometimes the characters seems too good natured, always changing the behavior from bad guy to good one... even those from the face slapping arcs but despite this everything is sweet.

a true psychopath

is he a psychopath ? I get the godhood issue but the rest is just creppy

hope she cheats him too

charming rap1st

a child of r4pe how gorgeous 🥰

there are chapters there's only system prompts. I mean, it's important to follow the levelling but it's became a point where it's really annoying. Ren is a reincarnator with what? his 40ies? but when with his parents he acts like a child. honestly he's a grown man. the psyche doesn't match up. the distopian world where rich eats poor is good and all, but lacks depth and explanation why is like that. why Ren wants only fancy stuff? he's from s poor background in his 2nd life and he just want buy rich stuff? that's it? we're at 400idh chapters and not a close view about his alchemist class or the development of his other persona. The female characters are flowery, and completely misogynist. they're players but their 2D minds only thinks about men, dresses and so on? I mean, that's a normal thing for cultivation novels but litrpg usually tends to be less male d1ck energy you know and more rpg lore

that's okay though. you keep improving and it's visible. who knows maybe someday you revisit it and publish on Amazon or smth. I'd buy it. must add: the plots and schemes are marvelous. the tension was high during those chaps.

so far i really enjoyed the reading. it's all we can expect from this niche and a bit more. the world building has a nice touch but the lore even though it's well made with reassured background and foundation to be explored it is also lacking a bit of touch, i mean we had glimpses about certain topics but like the demons spawn or their activities we only heard them now (200ish) but I also can understand a bit the author wants to keep leading to finish in a fast paced way the overview of the first continent and that's ok but it also lacks understanding of those forces and their mindset... i mean the psique of characters, it's like they're robots doing stuff. there's no interaction beyond accomplishing tasks. There's no depth to their psique, I'm including side characters and mc himself. but it's funny bc those grandmasters were well made and the emperor as well. every chapter made to acomodate those people were funny and full of nice expectations but the rest are only robots accomplishing tasks without much of a interaction. the slave with red hair was introduced with so much details in the first shopping spree I thought I would see her doing stuff but after that she just greets the guests. and last but not least I must say the way the author made the culture of plundering and greedy behavior for resources was spectacular. it was stablished systemativaly and a sort of justification not the same info dump all cultivation novel writes. there's some sort of resonance and you could see the "rules" there's no hypocrisy because everyone blooded their hands to get there and iit's understandable. it's just some insights of myself please hope you don't mind. keep it up 🙂

when fred uprooted the tree