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RAMichaels

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Just a writer who takes inspiration from everyday life and turns it into something different and magical! Find me on Inkitt, Dreame, Wattpad, and Amazon

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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels1yr
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    Author, so far so good. Keep it up. I would advise to go back and ensure the periods are placed properly and that the first letter of a word after each period is capitalized.

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
    HASSAN
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels1yr
    Replied to Zuleihat

    Thank you so much for the inspiring words! It means a whole lot!

    Ch 1 Meet April
    APRIL FOOL'S KILLER (BOOK 1): APRIL KILLS FOOLS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Replied to RAMichaels

    But April is such a stealthy firestarter!!! One of her many talents...she is methodical never sloppy!

    Ch 1 Charred Demise
    APRIL FOOL'S KILLER (BOOK 1): APRIL KILLS FOOLS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Replied to ThePotatoKing

    I agree!

    Ch 1 Charred Demise
    APRIL FOOL'S KILLER (BOOK 1): APRIL KILLS FOOLS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Replied to ThePotatoKing

    Also her abuse by the hands of her parents and the maid climaxed in the 13 Chambers chapter and in the chapter Charred Demise, it climaxed to her sweet revenge. Where she ended all three poetically at once. As she readyed herself since she was seven years old. At 8 years old, she became an avid reader, and you know what they say about readers. She matured beyond her years. At 12 years old, her plan was set in motion successfully by reading such books as Art of War. In her inner monologue in chapter one, she explained what she had gone through and her plan to remedy this which was rising action. And we learn through a different lens, how criminal her parents really are and how wide the cult really is in Chapter two. In Chapter three, the story climaxes to her revenge to her sicko parents and maid. In the 13 Chambers chapter, her whole life was from her first to her 12th birthday was laid bare. Yes she is fully aware of the cult's existence but she chooses to hide in plain sight. She is after all a teenager. All she wanted was her freedom and being able to go to school. She had even more than that. She was a billionaire heiress with a best friend who secretly loves her. High School life to College life was explored as she was easily the smartest person in any room in the chapter Jean Thoby. She was always 10 steps ahead of everyone. She was satisfied with Mike and his parents. She was satisfied with high school and college as long as Mike was there in the chapter Greek Life and Dreamscapes. Once he was taken out of the picture, rising action. It climaxed to her revenge on those frats on her 18th birthday. Yes it's definitely intense. After losing the one person she truly dedicated herself to, who she was tethered to, she performed an exceptional sacrifice through a ritual which catapulted her to Deity status. Now, she no longer sets Fools on fire but she makes them relive what they had done to their victims on April Fool's Day. Yes you are right I have added more chapters to it on the other platforms such as Inkitt and Wattpad. Since I have it in completed status on here, I cannot add more chapters. But I don't want to over spill as to instill mystery. I still want to have enough mystery left for the other books. 馃グ

    APRIL FOOL'S KILLER (BOOK 1): APRIL KILLS FOOLS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Replied to ThePotatoKing

    It's a trilogy. This is the first book. The other two books will focus on her Goddess status and how she will cope/deal with Mike's 'death' and the Cult. As stated before noone leaves the cult. Maybe a Goddess can rectify that. I have to leave some more tea/conflicts, resolution, or cliffhanger for the other books. Thank you so much for the review馃グ

    APRIL FOOL'S KILLER (BOOK 1): APRIL KILLS FOOLS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Replied to bunnyrabbit

    Grandma dearest of course!

    Folier "Foley" NEPTENU: The semi-protagonist of the story. He was institutionalized for murdering his entire family on his 18th birthday. His very existence was foretold.
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    How can you get your bold fond and italics? Great structural tool!

    ....饾悂饾悁饾悅饾悐 饾悡饾悗 饾悡饾悋饾悇 饾悘饾悜饾悇饾悞饾悇饾悕饾悡....
    ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    BOOMM disease...lol! Clever!

    "No boss, it's not contagious, don't worry. But it is a rare condition, boss. It means 'Bored Out Of My Mind' disease. I've helped you kill a lot of versions of that Eric guy that it's gotten pretty exhausting." The mysterious assassin's statement calmed Delete down for the moment but at the same time irked him that he was using such an excuse to get a vacation.
    ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Now I wonder how many times I have been turned off to be turned on again...very philosophical!

    Ch 2 REOCCURRING APOCALYPSE
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    But wouldn't he experience some type of deja vu?

    "Of course, you don't remember me! I mean, it's been different Eric's from different timelines that I tried to save you. And If I remember correctly, it's been exactly twenty-three lifetimes that I have tried to save you already." The unknown invader just exposed the existence of timelines and alternate realities to Eric.
    ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Duh!

    "Of course, you don't remember me! I mean, it's been different Eric's from different timelines that I tried to save you. And If I remember correctly, it's been exactly twenty-three lifetimes that I have tried to save you already." The unknown invader just exposed the existence of timelines and alternate realities to Eric.
    ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Neat!

    "It's basically your life data recorded in the CyberVerse; It tells us, hackers, if you're alive, dead, asleep, scared, running, walking, defecating, peeing, depressed, and even your location." The unknown invader explained.
    ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Such a predicament!

    "But you may not have to die as well." The invader thought to himself.
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Are you a hacker author?

    Ch 1 SPACE HACKER
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    So gnarly...what would you do? For me, I would probably ask how to stop it and why is it happening?

    "I did warn you that you'll be killed by 1:04 AM right? Well, it only gets worse from there. There are so many ways that you've died before."
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    It is so hard for the the Branders in the world to accept truth bombs...

    "Isn't this some kind of prank or something!? Hey, a#shole! Are you threatening me right now!馃挗馃挗" Confusion had turned to pure rage.
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    lol...

    "Isn't this some kind of prank or something!? Hey, a#shole! Are you threatening me right now!馃挗馃挗" Confusion had turned to pure rage.
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Very plausible! Just squint out of your right eye...and imagine we are never truly alone!

    What most people of the world seem to believe is that they're alone in the world, or the universe. But they'd be wrong. Why? Because what they don't know is that they're not alone, for what lies in the crevices of the world, the gaps of the universe, are other worlds unknown to our current world.
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  • RAMichaels
    RAMichaels2yr
    Commented

    Out of breath...

    Ch 14 Your perverted dog will be ready in just a few moments*(R-18)
    The Demon of Lust: If you want to live, keep me entertained
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