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Quite engaging as a sci-fi story even though build up in ch 1 was quite slow. But chapter 2 put you in action immediately and it was awesome. The mc might be not to my liking, but I'm sensing a redemption arc in the future, so, I'm sticking for the continuation.
The Ultimate Cyborg
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Thank you for the review. The MC is just an ordinary 18-year-old schoolboy. He will gradually develop as the story progresses. I intend to make him learn from his mistakes. Simple, naive characters have a lot of potential for character development. I hope I can do justice to the MC. Thanks for reading.